12/24/2005 c1 11Tzotel431
Oh, thats sad.

~Tzotel

4/2/2003 c1 1Ingenue Kitsune
Damn... sick parents. Mother fuckers. Oh well... see ya laterz. Great poem. ¤§¤Kat¤§¤

9/28/2002 c1 ChaosFactor6
A very dark and disturbing poem, I felt the pain reading it. Truly amazing poem.

8/17/2002 c1 64not sure yet
disturbing, but well written, and a very painful topic too, great job

5/23/2002 c1 23Natassja
god, that's really disturbing + sad *sniffs*, but v. well written

5/21/2002 c1 6aNGeLz3xprOtOn
y so many pple say its scary huh? maybe they think you went thru that... you didn't did you? hehe... anyway, i muz say it's different from your other poems in terms of style... you're so cool! 6 in less than a day? wow...

5/20/2002 c1 3Just Kelsey
That was very well written and descibed. It's so sad that the little girl still loves him... but it's so true. An amazing peice. To the ppl who said: "isn't it scary?" well duh. It's supposed to be scary. but it makes u think, and that's what's important. Great job.

5/20/2002 c1 Mirai
Wow... well in such a small piece of writing this is such a scary one. It is nicely written and yet it's scary...