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10/10/2002 c1 32RiddleSolved
wow, this is really good. sad and full of feeling. in other reviews it's written that they don't understand, but as i've felt like that myself, alone with my memory sitting in a room and stuff, i really understand it, and sofar it's the best poem i've read on ffn. Congrats! :) (by the way, if you wanna read my BEST poem it's "hidden Sorrow" and "walking"(a story/poem), not the poems you reviwed...)
9/26/2002 c1 Needa S
Great poem words flowed nicely. Write more!
9/18/2002 c1 12FattyButt
pretty good, very descriptive. Thanks for the reviews. the two you reviewed, were not my best work at all. Try reading "Untitled", That is my favorite one, and the one I am very proud of. Again, great job on this.
9/16/2002 c1 Smiley- Bear
Awesome! This is really good. Hope you don't mind I am going to put on my favorite stories list. Keep writing!
5/23/2002 c1 turtle

good job! i thought that this poem has feeling to it...lol

well, you did a great job, and keep it up!


PS. I STILL haven't gotten the vhance to write yet, but i'll find time somehow!;-)
5/23/2002 c1 Not Kermit Until Tomorrow
Hmmm... Very interesting... I like it! It is really good and paints a cool picture. I am just confused as to where this one came from. Oh well, the mind of a poet is a vast well of secrets indeed. I like it a lot though. Very good, almost as good as "I'll Never Forget", but nothing can beat that poem my dear Gnat. I guess that I will go review some more of your stuff. Luv, Me
5/22/2002 c1 fed-ex
I am not a writer, so most of the time you should probably ignore my reviews, and I don't know how to write poetry or what exactly makes up a poem. So, you can disregard to review below.
5/21/2002 c1 fed-ex
To sad and sulky does not give advice or any thing. I didn't understand it
5/21/2002 c1 8Geca
Really very good! I know how things are, where you can sit, and think back, recalling a voice, a few words, a taste, often times, snippets of a melody. Very lovely! I'm glad I'm the first to review. Nice job, and keep writing!

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