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4/2/2003 c1 1Ingenue Kitsune
GOD, I know. It would be great if we could all do that, wouldn't it... just fly away... yeah. DAMN those cages... Do you see my sharp little teeth? I'm gonna gnaw through the steel bars one day... Haha. Ha HA. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

lol, ¤§¤Kat¤§¤
8/30/2002 c1 53Impressionist
so.,.you started wtih rhyming and quit half way through? no no...big no no...

not bad.
8/19/2002 c1 55Fire of the Vampire
To be so free would be suffocating. Agreed, it would be awesome, but after a while, you would get bored. You wouldn't have your writings, you wouldn't have a family, your friends wouldn't be there. This is a good poem, but it reinforces the line "you never appreciate what you have until it is no longer there." Keep writing!

God Bless

Much Love

Later Daze

- Kacie
8/17/2002 c1 64not sure yet
wow, i can relate, very nicely put into words
5/28/2002 c1 sakuraying
i agree totally with u...my life suz
5/26/2002 c1 22Gevo
angsty...
5/25/2002 c1 may er
u should know i like this poem rite? told u whenu showed me.. aniwae i'll say it again.. gd job! ") keep it up!
5/25/2002 c1 may er
u should know i like this poem rite? told u whenu showed me.. aniwae i'll say it again.. gd job! ") keep it up!
5/22/2002 c1 79CrimsonCat
I think the last line nails it. Nice work. I don't know anyone who wouldn't be able to relate to this.

Dai stiho

~CrimsonCat~
5/22/2002 c1 1Raziela
Excellent. *wipes off her tears* Man, it's a wonderful poem. I sure can relate to it.
5/22/2002 c1 91Sarah Jane Stokes
I really get where you are coming from on this. good job!
5/22/2002 c1 mIsEry
i understand, man.
5/22/2002 c1 Yseulte
I like this poem.. I can definitely relate O_o
5/22/2002 c1 6aNGeLz3xprOtOn
am i the 'smarter friend'? i'm so hurt, man... but otherwise it's a good 1!

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