for Oblivious5/26/2002 c1 
7Mosie
Thanks for reviewing my poem, "Lobby." What a fantastic poem! It's really cool how the oblivious thing is carried on like that and the dialogue. Me gusta.
7MosieThanks for reviewing my poem, "Lobby." What a fantastic poem! It's really cool how the oblivious thing is carried on like that and the dialogue. Me gusta.
5/24/2002 c1 1onym47
I LOVE THIS! oh my gosh... this is so... perfect that its scary... keep writing!
1onym47I LOVE THIS! oh my gosh... this is so... perfect that its scary... keep writing!
5/23/2002 c1 1Escritora
Kristin... this is... not only the bets thing you've ever written but... one of the best I've ever read. I didn't want it to end. It had such meaning, great rhyme, and a real flow to it. It touched me somewhere inside, too. Your line about "the space between..." made me freeze. How many attempted poems have I tried to write with those three consecutive words? ah, u dont get it, and why shud u. this is great. im too mebarassed to post my realllllly personal ones... just the semi ones. :o) see ya, awesome.
1EscritoraKristin... this is... not only the bets thing you've ever written but... one of the best I've ever read. I didn't want it to end. It had such meaning, great rhyme, and a real flow to it. It touched me somewhere inside, too. Your line about "the space between..." made me freeze. How many attempted poems have I tried to write with those three consecutive words? ah, u dont get it, and why shud u. this is great. im too mebarassed to post my realllllly personal ones... just the semi ones. :o) see ya, awesome.
5/23/2002 c1 19mydsmbr
Woah... that was one of the best poems I've read on here. It was full of raw emotion and I can't say that I haven't felt that way before. When I read it all that came to mind was a certain someone. Anyway, off track. I loved this poem. It's amazing and I hope you write and post more like it. Spectacular! :)
19mydsmbrWoah... that was one of the best poems I've read on here. It was full of raw emotion and I can't say that I haven't felt that way before. When I read it all that came to mind was a certain someone. Anyway, off track. I loved this poem. It's amazing and I hope you write and post more like it. Spectacular! :)