for Strength9/10/2003 c1 
8Serana
it's a good poem nonetheless but the last line's kinda creepy.
'My best strength is my hope that everything is not as I see it. '
that kinda seems like a pessimistic view doesn't it?
i like the way you end it. it leaves somewhat a mystery behind and keeps the reader pondering over it. gd job
8Seranait's a good poem nonetheless but the last line's kinda creepy.
'My best strength is my hope that everything is not as I see it. '
that kinda seems like a pessimistic view doesn't it?
i like the way you end it. it leaves somewhat a mystery behind and keeps the reader pondering over it. gd job
6/7/2003 c1 2Platerair Queen
That's a blessing strength, and yet a curse all the same, isn't it?
Ignorance, or naivette. . . . To some it is a blessing, to deny the world, to believe that there is good in others.
I think there is, yet even the good ones can be cruel. Everyone, even myself, can be mean at times. I mean the things I say at first, but then regret them later.
I'm kinda a ditz too.
I don't know what my strength is. . . . . . Perhaps, it is the strength of. . . Well, of being honest, to the point of being to openminded. Hah! It's a curse too!
Well, it's like they say: 'Your strength is your greatest weakness.' Or my favorite: 'The worst foe lies in oneself.'
None of those quotes are mine.
Anyway, I never do know when to shut up, so I'll leave my review with a smiley face! :)
2Platerair QueenThat's a blessing strength, and yet a curse all the same, isn't it?
Ignorance, or naivette. . . . To some it is a blessing, to deny the world, to believe that there is good in others.
I think there is, yet even the good ones can be cruel. Everyone, even myself, can be mean at times. I mean the things I say at first, but then regret them later.
I'm kinda a ditz too.
I don't know what my strength is. . . . . . Perhaps, it is the strength of. . . Well, of being honest, to the point of being to openminded. Hah! It's a curse too!
Well, it's like they say: 'Your strength is your greatest weakness.' Or my favorite: 'The worst foe lies in oneself.'
None of those quotes are mine.
Anyway, I never do know when to shut up, so I'll leave my review with a smiley face! :)
9/5/2002 c1 7Relena Peace
Wow, that was really, really good. Hmm...let me see. I have a few strengths...but then again, my faults even them out. ::sweat drop:: Again, good poem. ^_~"
7Relena PeaceWow, that was really, really good. Hmm...let me see. I have a few strengths...but then again, my faults even them out. ::sweat drop:: Again, good poem. ^_~"
8/28/2002 c1 30LittleMaggie
I love this poem... it is very well written and you speak of raw true emotion. Good job.
30LittleMaggieI love this poem... it is very well written and you speak of raw true emotion. Good job.
5/23/2002 c1 28Shadowgirl
Nice poem! I really like the message behind it. "Everybody has a strength, that we either hide, or seek" that's a great line. Nice job!
28ShadowgirlNice poem! I really like the message behind it. "Everybody has a strength, that we either hide, or seek" that's a great line. Nice job!