for The Unraveller and the Watcheye7/30/2003 c1 
13Draic
Cool. Great imagery – I could picture everything clearly. It sounds like it could be an introduction for a story – who are these two frosty queens? Why are they there? Inspiring.
Wishing you Motivation, Inspiration, and Luck!
- Draic
13DraicCool. Great imagery – I could picture everything clearly. It sounds like it could be an introduction for a story – who are these two frosty queens? Why are they there? Inspiring.
Wishing you Motivation, Inspiration, and Luck!
- Draic
5/24/2002 c1 8Jetso
Short, but pretty. You could carry the imagery further and expore this scene you've created, now it feels a little incomplete, like a sketch that could become a painting. Lovely imagery here though, love the idea of "the serpentine wraiths" Your rhymes a tad irregular, but that give it a very readable pattern. Keep writing!
8JetsoShort, but pretty. You could carry the imagery further and expore this scene you've created, now it feels a little incomplete, like a sketch that could become a painting. Lovely imagery here though, love the idea of "the serpentine wraiths" Your rhymes a tad irregular, but that give it a very readable pattern. Keep writing!