for Deaths grim desire6/12/2003 c1 
139Gauy
This one is so sad, but I guess it's supposed to be happy. So why do I think it'd be happy, if it happened to me?
139GauyThis one is so sad, but I guess it's supposed to be happy. So why do I think it'd be happy, if it happened to me?
11/28/2002 c1 36obsidian katana
wow...great poem! it's so sad and moving and true about death! i really like it! keep writing! and thanks for the reviews!
36obsidian katanawow...great poem! it's so sad and moving and true about death! i really like it! keep writing! and thanks for the reviews!
9/19/2002 c1 Rose Dark Thorn
Very touching and true. You are very truely talented. I shall read more.
Very touching and true. You are very truely talented. I shall read more.
8/15/2002 c1 14Angel Nazi
OMG iloved your pome! it was soooo dramatic! it was AMAZING! like totaly keep it uP!
ANGEL NAZI ^_^
14Angel NaziOMG iloved your pome! it was soooo dramatic! it was AMAZING! like totaly keep it uP!
ANGEL NAZI ^_^
8/9/2002 c1 17Jade6
Spooky, errie and powerful. A wonderful piece of poetry. It was very moving. I have also lost someone close to me recently so I can really relate to this piece. Anyway, keep writing!
Jade
ps - thanks for reviewing my stuff! =)
17Jade6Spooky, errie and powerful. A wonderful piece of poetry. It was very moving. I have also lost someone close to me recently so I can really relate to this piece. Anyway, keep writing!
Jade
ps - thanks for reviewing my stuff! =)
7/14/2002 c1 12Daredee
the only thing in this life as certain as birth is death...can't remember who said that, maybe it was me, maybe it was you...either way, sombre poem...you're quite a Wordsworth aren't you?
12Daredeethe only thing in this life as certain as birth is death...can't remember who said that, maybe it was me, maybe it was you...either way, sombre poem...you're quite a Wordsworth aren't you?
6/11/2002 c1 9Lauren Skonech
Wow... you rule! you're an awesome author... (thank you so much for reviewing my poem you're my hero... and yes... you may certainly print it ;) )
9Lauren SkonechWow... you rule! you're an awesome author... (thank you so much for reviewing my poem you're my hero... and yes... you may certainly print it ;) )
5/31/2002 c1 Guest
ah...grim 1 could say...but i like it ne way
(guess who)
ah...grim 1 could say...but i like it ne way
(guess who)
5/31/2002 c1 Guest
ah...grim 1 could say...but i like it ne way
(guess who)
ah...grim 1 could say...but i like it ne way
(guess who)
5/26/2002 c1 40TK Styles
Great poem, love the imagery and nice rhymes. It seems I have gotten more into dark poetry myself. Keep up the good work. Peace.
40TK StylesGreat poem, love the imagery and nice rhymes. It seems I have gotten more into dark poetry myself. Keep up the good work. Peace.