4/27/2009 c2 Breath Caught Holding
Meh. The story was okay. I love do to see a prepy chearleader get screwed.
Meh. The story was okay. I love do to see a prepy chearleader get screwed.
3/16/2006 c2 8Zeva
*laughing maniacally* Ha! Crashing parties sounds like such fun. ^_^ And methinks it wasn't a girl Chris was kissing, but a guy? Myabe? *shrug* I dunno.
*puppy face* Update? Pwease?
*laughing maniacally* Ha! Crashing parties sounds like such fun. ^_^ And methinks it wasn't a girl Chris was kissing, but a guy? Myabe? *shrug* I dunno.
*puppy face* Update? Pwease?
3/16/2006 c1 Zeva
Hahaha...Very nice start. ^_^ I like Malkom's cynicism. How he's all, "She's fake this and shallow that..." It made me smile, because there really are so many people like that - shallow and fake.
Onwards to the next chappie!
Hahaha...Very nice start. ^_^ I like Malkom's cynicism. How he's all, "She's fake this and shallow that..." It made me smile, because there really are so many people like that - shallow and fake.
Onwards to the next chappie!
5/18/2005 c2 6Lolita SM Morbid
There are a bit too many characters for my taste, and I'm not sure what's supposed to be happening, so I'm not exactly getting into it. I'll definitely read more when you update, though.
There are a bit too many characters for my taste, and I'm not sure what's supposed to be happening, so I'm not exactly getting into it. I'll definitely read more when you update, though.
11/6/2004 c1 Bronwynne
Bern, you better get off your kiester and write more of this one. My baseball bat and I will NOT be denied!
Bern, you better get off your kiester and write more of this one. My baseball bat and I will NOT be denied!
12/1/2003 c2 DH
Hey DCJ! I wanted to review your story so you know I liked it. I LOVE the gatecrashing. It makes me wish I had done that to the popular squad in highschool, oh well. I suppose I'll just have to let my future children do that...
Hey DCJ! I wanted to review your story so you know I liked it. I LOVE the gatecrashing. It makes me wish I had done that to the popular squad in highschool, oh well. I suppose I'll just have to let my future children do that...
8/9/2003 c2 20Xi
i was bored. so i read this... and its good... so why don't you just continue? since, i enjoy reading about people crashing cheerleaders parties... its fun to read *wink*
yea, so... continue...
-MandaZ
i was bored. so i read this... and its good... so why don't you just continue? since, i enjoy reading about people crashing cheerleaders parties... its fun to read *wink*
yea, so... continue...
-MandaZ
5/11/2003 c2 P-chan
Ya outta add some more to this, if the
inspiration's still there. Personally, i like
it. im pretty curiose as to whats goona
go wrong fer someone next. ;) lol well,
i hope ya do add some, but if ya dont; ya
dont.
Ya outta add some more to this, if the
inspiration's still there. Personally, i like
it. im pretty curiose as to whats goona
go wrong fer someone next. ;) lol well,
i hope ya do add some, but if ya dont; ya
dont.
3/1/2003 c2 5hupsoonheng
Mrow! Please, please continue this! If not for the sake of the readers then at least write it.for.fun? Please? I really wanna read more of this! ^^
~Rura
Mrow! Please, please continue this! If not for the sake of the readers then at least write it.for.fun? Please? I really wanna read more of this! ^^
~Rura
1/4/2003 c2 15Switch
Dear God, Brittany's a bitch. I can guarantee that I can get you a ton of reviewers if you kill her off. The more gruesome, the better. I love the story, though. Can't wait to hear more about this "girl" Chris was sucking face with. ^_~ Update soon please!
Dear God, Brittany's a bitch. I can guarantee that I can get you a ton of reviewers if you kill her off. The more gruesome, the better. I love the story, though. Can't wait to hear more about this "girl" Chris was sucking face with. ^_~ Update soon please!
12/7/2002 c2 2LostC
em... not exactly getting this. too many characters are making my head spin. where's the slash? who's the main chara? i hope it becomes clearer as you go along... have you updated lately? please do, it's a good story.
em... not exactly getting this. too many characters are making my head spin. where's the slash? who's the main chara? i hope it becomes clearer as you go along... have you updated lately? please do, it's a good story.
11/16/2002 c2 9Bienfoy
cooool, i'm so hoping that malkom and chris are together*grins*great set of char's!
cooool, i'm so hoping that malkom and chris are together*grins*great set of char's!
11/7/2002 c1 4PaLiNdRoMe
the popularity thing's a bit exaggerated, but i can understand why.. i hope you keep writing, its fun to read -g-
the popularity thing's a bit exaggerated, but i can understand why.. i hope you keep writing, its fun to read -g-