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10/18/2002 c1 Anni
This is really good. I know exactly how you feel.
10/18/2002 c1 17Serri
Indeed. Depressing, well written, nice imagery. unfortunately, I know exactly how you feel. (Gee . . . hope this wasn't directed toward me once upon a time, or really, anybody I know, because nothing stabs like betrayal.) Good way to funnel your emotions, though, turn it into cool poetry.
6/2/2002 c1 8Shaan Lien
Ooh, this one was actually sort of kind of in a way long. At least it was longer than "Sleeping With The Enemy". You actually used the principle of alliteration, which you didn't realize, but still. I did like it, it was nice and depressing like my normal realm of stuff I like. But yeah. Longer. Longer. Longer. Longer. Longer. Maybe if I put that down enough it will actually sink in.
5/26/2002 c1 Vikki
Good
5/26/2002 c1 21mealle
Whoa! Really deep...I know all too well how you feel. I hope that you can figure out the problem with your friend...cuz I have yet to fix mine. Good luck and keep on writing!
5/26/2002 c1 1Laralanthalasa
I know the feeling, good poem, excellent poem.

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