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7/11/2001 c1 Mina Rose
I got a little confused not knowing exactly what was going on in this story. I had an idea about what was happening, but not totally. At least I know that you wrote it when you were younger so that might be a reason. My first story (thankfully I never posted it) was ok, but not very descriptive. Now yours was descriptive which was a pretty good thing! Keep on writing!
10/27/2000 c1 Christa
Wow. I mean...wow. Really incredible.
8/5/2000 c1 Neptune
Well...it was interesting. Needs some work like you said, but a very good beginning to a story. Not bad for 12. I couldn't write anything when I was 12. Anyways, keep up the good work! ~Neptune~
5/11/2000 c1 ElectricPoweredShock
Hey, that's pretty neat... I like it. It just needs some better grammer and punctuation...
4/30/2000 c1 Iya
It was hard to understand. . .with no paragraphs and all.
4/24/2000 c1 me
That just went straight over my head.
4/19/2000 c1 Sumi
uh...okay...that was...was...no comment.
4/11/2000 c1 Cats 7
Hmm... Crazy
4/11/2000 c1 LT TRAINR
woah that's insane but the start and end correspond

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