for fire12/29/2002 c1 
4Zapenstap
nice poem. I think that's the way a lot of people feel, or I did anyway, especially as an adolescent. It's one of those things that comes on you in a mood and quickly passes so that you really think you mean it when you say "nothing is wrong." That's always the way I feel anyway, like whatever problems I have aren't worth burdening someone else to listen to, and yet desperately wishing to be badgered into sharing. I think something like that is common for everyone, but the degree of problems and the way people deal with them change. My problems were always manageable in the scheme of things, but I still wish I shared more of them. Anyway, I like your poem. I hope it was written on a mood and that your problems are not too severe. best of luck. Continue your other story.
zapenstap
4Zapenstapnice poem. I think that's the way a lot of people feel, or I did anyway, especially as an adolescent. It's one of those things that comes on you in a mood and quickly passes so that you really think you mean it when you say "nothing is wrong." That's always the way I feel anyway, like whatever problems I have aren't worth burdening someone else to listen to, and yet desperately wishing to be badgered into sharing. I think something like that is common for everyone, but the degree of problems and the way people deal with them change. My problems were always manageable in the scheme of things, but I still wish I shared more of them. Anyway, I like your poem. I hope it was written on a mood and that your problems are not too severe. best of luck. Continue your other story.
zapenstap
11/27/2002 c1 102Terra Fire
This is very good. It sent chills up my spin, knowing how true it is. I hope you come up w/some more poems!
~Veggie Girl~
102Terra FireThis is very good. It sent chills up my spin, knowing how true it is. I hope you come up w/some more poems!
~Veggie Girl~
11/20/2002 c1 6LadyChanta
wow i like your poem. it sounds just like my friend Van Sama (aka Jed) he doesn't talk of his problems he doesn't think them worthy to be told. any wayz i like the poem and chappy 13 is up and Cerridwen. Just thought to let you know.
Ja Ne
Lady Chanta
6LadyChantawow i like your poem. it sounds just like my friend Van Sama (aka Jed) he doesn't talk of his problems he doesn't think them worthy to be told. any wayz i like the poem and chappy 13 is up and Cerridwen. Just thought to let you know.
Ja Ne
Lady Chanta
11/15/2002 c1 1Camaro
hey there! its me..Camaro author of Dark Angel. just wanted to read your poem and id have to say... I AM IMPRESSED! sometimes When your the author of a story that alot of people are reading.. you never really get to take the time and get to know your readers. Im SO glad i did. Your poem was beautiful (*sigh.. i think i use that word too often) but i can hardly think of another description to use. It was true.. and I think it shows what a deep person you must be. I thought it was extremely discritive and sophisticated.. in short.. (though i think i could go on forever) I LOVED IT!.. plus.. i think ill tell everyone that reads Dark Angel to give it a look.. from what ive seen from your reviews.. Your definetly under appreciated for your obvious talent. keep writing love!
Camaro
1Camarohey there! its me..Camaro author of Dark Angel. just wanted to read your poem and id have to say... I AM IMPRESSED! sometimes When your the author of a story that alot of people are reading.. you never really get to take the time and get to know your readers. Im SO glad i did. Your poem was beautiful (*sigh.. i think i use that word too often) but i can hardly think of another description to use. It was true.. and I think it shows what a deep person you must be. I thought it was extremely discritive and sophisticated.. in short.. (though i think i could go on forever) I LOVED IT!.. plus.. i think ill tell everyone that reads Dark Angel to give it a look.. from what ive seen from your reviews.. Your definetly under appreciated for your obvious talent. keep writing love!
Camaro
8/4/2002 c1 syaoran-fan
I love the poem. I hope you write more like this.
I love the poem. I hope you write more like this.