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5/10/2006 c1 23WickedSilence
With "incomplete" in the last line, I truthfully cannot find anything to think of other than "What is so impossible?" It's a good poem in that it makes me think (always pleasant, that) but I didn't really like one line: "completely indestructable". The stressing of the words make it jar rather uncomfortably with "impossible" and so slightly irritate me. Perhaps this is an intended effect? Because it certainly, annoyingly adds to the frustration described in the second stanza. All together, not a bad poem indeed.
6/11/2002 c1 nakarem
its okay like you said i think its a little incomplete to well i liked it
5/27/2002 c1 9ankh x princess
I think it's pretty darn good if ya ask me. :-)

kitten xx

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