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1/8/2006 c1 183writerforever
Wow, a neat poem. Very inique I think.
10/16/2002 c1 71Toireasa
The first part is better than the last, but I like it all the same. Nice work.

~Toireasa
8/17/2002 c1 Fire breathing beast
You know who I am and I can't sign in to review anything of yours anymore... hee, I love this... write more T&N... please? Thief and Nob, eh? That's different...

~Celtic-Mage
6/15/2002 c1 Byrd
Cool, tho' Iv'e already read it before..."She looks back at me, her wildness gone" could be changed t' 'She looksback at me, the wilderness gone', or something...Needs very little work.
5/30/2002 c1 32Morbane
Wow! I like this story. I looked at the summary and thought - okay, you are psychic. Do you know that for the last 6 years my favourite imaginary creature has been a huge golden dragon called Corinth! Talk about coincidence!

Back to *your* story. I'm not sure rhyme is completely appropriate, but it's not bad. Could do with a little smoothing out, not much though. I like the ending - it's not completely conclusive, leaves you with the idea that there will be more, without breaking off abruptly.
5/30/2002 c1 16Celtic Dragoness
Yay...Thief and Nob, eh? I think that was supposed to be NobLE, right? I like this...I can't make fun of anything in it, party pooper...*grin*

~Dragon

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