
11/26/2003 c1
29yellow sparks
Hi Lisa! It's Emily...Wow, I really like this poem. It really sends out your message. That's what I like about poetry, it's a different and unique way to vent. I like the way you expressed your thoughts and your choice of words. Great job!

Hi Lisa! It's Emily...Wow, I really like this poem. It really sends out your message. That's what I like about poetry, it's a different and unique way to vent. I like the way you expressed your thoughts and your choice of words. Great job!
8/8/2002 c1
8Angelfish369
Wow. That's scary. I hope you don't actually feel this way. It's too depressing.

Wow. That's scary. I hope you don't actually feel this way. It's too depressing.
8/2/2002 c1
21Bobo
Wow... not like you other ones... I feel. Still, it's beautiful like a black rose with thorns of poisin. Did I spell theat wrong... Probably...Oh well... ACK! That was freaky... Did I just ... write that.. freakis comparison.. eek! ~ Bobo ~

Wow... not like you other ones... I feel. Still, it's beautiful like a black rose with thorns of poisin. Did I spell theat wrong... Probably...Oh well... ACK! That was freaky... Did I just ... write that.. freakis comparison.. eek! ~ Bobo ~
6/12/2002 c1 Death of Ba Gook
Wow...*in awed silence*...that's amazing. Sad, dark, full of angst, and depressing-just the way I like it! You have talent.
Wow...*in awed silence*...that's amazing. Sad, dark, full of angst, and depressing-just the way I like it! You have talent.
6/11/2002 c1
3Cairothegreat
Hey, if you do find someone willing to kill you, could you give me their phone# ?

Hey, if you do find someone willing to kill you, could you give me their phone# ?
6/2/2002 c1
13tainted mind
oooh, that is soooo good! lol, thanks for reviewing my shit! that's pretty much the way i feel too! awesome poem!

oooh, that is soooo good! lol, thanks for reviewing my shit! that's pretty much the way i feel too! awesome poem!
6/2/2002 c1 Darkangel-mysticat
'Buu make pow, pow pow.'...^_^, Sorry for not reveiwing all of your poems-I assure you I read every one. It's just, I've read so many poems in one day, and I am running out of stuff to say for reveiws. So , in short, I think your writing style is great, that whole running out of time theme-all very astutue and full of insight to what others refuse to see. I commend you *bows in a foolish manner* Really, I do! ^_^
'Buu make pow, pow pow.'...^_^, Sorry for not reveiwing all of your poems-I assure you I read every one. It's just, I've read so many poems in one day, and I am running out of stuff to say for reveiws. So , in short, I think your writing style is great, that whole running out of time theme-all very astutue and full of insight to what others refuse to see. I commend you *bows in a foolish manner* Really, I do! ^_^
6/1/2002 c1
124Penumbra
Wow, intense. I can definitely relate to the feeling...but all the same, I hope you don't really get any ideas 'cause then the world would be short one great writer! Please keep writing! It helps to release...sometimes. ;)

Wow, intense. I can definitely relate to the feeling...but all the same, I hope you don't really get any ideas 'cause then the world would be short one great writer! Please keep writing! It helps to release...sometimes. ;)
6/1/2002 c1
2thereaperman
man this is great work, i can definitely relate.
keep it comeing, yours reaper

man this is great work, i can definitely relate.
keep it comeing, yours reaper