for A Vampire's Kiss6/27/2003 c33 
7Blankppr
I would like to see the rest of this... you haven't updated in awhile... PLEASE FINISH IT **begs**
7BlankpprI would like to see the rest of this... you haven't updated in awhile... PLEASE FINISH IT **begs**
11/9/2002 c1 Asylum Escapees once again too lazy to log in
*eye twitches* Okay, I've waited, and waited, and WAITED! Where is the next chapter? We need another chapter! Okay, if someone close to you died, you've been part of a tramatizing accident, or something closely related to the above, I'll forgive you, but if not... I'm sorry. But I REALLY like your story, and I want to find out what happens next. NEED to know what happens next. Sure, I can't make TO big a deal about it because me and my friends have not posted a new chapter for ohhh... about three weeks. But you've been months! *sniff* Must have new chapter! Anyway, happy typing!
Luffs,
Emy
*eye twitches* Okay, I've waited, and waited, and WAITED! Where is the next chapter? We need another chapter! Okay, if someone close to you died, you've been part of a tramatizing accident, or something closely related to the above, I'll forgive you, but if not... I'm sorry. But I REALLY like your story, and I want to find out what happens next. NEED to know what happens next. Sure, I can't make TO big a deal about it because me and my friends have not posted a new chapter for ohhh... about three weeks. But you've been months! *sniff* Must have new chapter! Anyway, happy typing!
Luffs,
Emy
11/5/2002 c33 TotallyToasty
Great story but i lossed my place in the big pharagraph's but other than that great can't wait for more.
Great story but i lossed my place in the big pharagraph's but other than that great can't wait for more.
9/22/2002 c33 anaicul
Its real good, most parts sounded familiar but i couldn't place from where.When are u going to update?
Its real good, most parts sounded familiar but i couldn't place from where.When are u going to update?
9/6/2002 c33 11Crystal Teardrop
This is AWESOME! great plot. Some parts of it were a little bit like Amelia Atwater-Rhode's Demon in My View. Have you read that? Well, it's great! Keep writing!
11Crystal TeardropThis is AWESOME! great plot. Some parts of it were a little bit like Amelia Atwater-Rhode's Demon in My View. Have you read that? Well, it's great! Keep writing!
8/17/2002 c26 Asylum Escapees
Emy: Yippie. You updated, FINALLY! I'm so happy. But pray tell, why did you do the lines in one HUGE pharagraph? You know it's VERY hard to read when you do that. Oh well, good chappies!
Emy: Yippie. You updated, FINALLY! I'm so happy. But pray tell, why did you do the lines in one HUGE pharagraph? You know it's VERY hard to read when you do that. Oh well, good chappies!
8/10/2002 c24 Dark-Fire2
nice nice, you have a good imagination. The plot is going along nicely and i like your character development, tho you need to work on some of the other characters as well as the main ones, thye need a little more history. you should post more tho, its pretty good.
ps. i like the character view points
nice nice, you have a good imagination. The plot is going along nicely and i like your character development, tho you need to work on some of the other characters as well as the main ones, thye need a little more history. you should post more tho, its pretty good.
ps. i like the character view points
7/21/2002 c24 Asylum Escapees To lazy to sign in
This is so cool! Keep posting please. One suggestion though, make the chapters longer. We'll until you post again, and I review again, Ja ne!
Emy-Head (just another member of the Asylum Academy Writing Commity)
This is so cool! Keep posting please. One suggestion though, make the chapters longer. We'll until you post again, and I review again, Ja ne!
Emy-Head (just another member of the Asylum Academy Writing Commity)
7/20/2002 c3 Cassin
Haha! Go Blade! Show those meat sack ur no1 to mess with! A fight-with Lyf in it?-interesting. The one suggestion I have is to make the Chaps a bit longer, ok? Again, plz read my story, plz!
Haha! Go Blade! Show those meat sack ur no1 to mess with! A fight-with Lyf in it?-interesting. The one suggestion I have is to make the Chaps a bit longer, ok? Again, plz read my story, plz!