
12/5/2005 c1
9Mary Phoenix
I like it. The pace reminds me of IM-ing, how it's all short, quick, and brief thoughts that flare and die. Reading it brings back how trite and dull IM-ing really is. And yet so saddening. I can totally relate to this poem. It's good.

I like it. The pace reminds me of IM-ing, how it's all short, quick, and brief thoughts that flare and die. Reading it brings back how trite and dull IM-ing really is. And yet so saddening. I can totally relate to this poem. It's good.