for OK2/6/2001 c1 Tango
Ouch. This one went straight to my heart.
Ouch. This one went straight to my heart.
11/25/2000 c1 
4Gem
I definitely know that feeling but you wrote it much better than I ever could. I loved the structure..and particuarly the repetition of 'Ok'. It really touched a nerve. I look forward to reading more of your work.
4GemI definitely know that feeling but you wrote it much better than I ever could. I loved the structure..and particuarly the repetition of 'Ok'. It really touched a nerve. I look forward to reading more of your work.
9/28/2000 c1 12Jennifer Ever Zero
...! That one hit me the wrong way. It was written in such harsh language, it sounded more true than most of them. So detached, so strange, just like you felt, and just like the rest of us. That struck a nerve.
12Jennifer Ever Zero...! That one hit me the wrong way. It was written in such harsh language, it sounded more true than most of them. So detached, so strange, just like you felt, and just like the rest of us. That struck a nerve.