for I'm just a girl10/1/2003 c1 
217MistrissD
O, I love the dark angles you took on, and the poem that occurs through every few lines really ties it together. Nicely done ^.^
217MistrissDO, I love the dark angles you took on, and the poem that occurs through every few lines really ties it together. Nicely done ^.^
8/8/2002 c1 90SweetGrape
Can I at least cry over the story?
It builds up and by the end you've got an awful knot in your guts.
Well written
90SweetGrapeCan I at least cry over the story?
It builds up and by the end you've got an awful knot in your guts.
Well written
7/16/2002 c1 Capriangel
wahh~! that's so sad. and depressing. v_v yet it was very well written. i must read something happier now
wahh~! that's so sad. and depressing. v_v yet it was very well written. i must read something happier now
6/26/2002 c1 8KawaiiCookie
Oh! I think I'm going to cry now! Your poem is so sweet... happy one year anniversary! =)
8KawaiiCookieOh! I think I'm going to cry now! Your poem is so sweet... happy one year anniversary! =)
6/6/2002 c1 kate
whoa,... cool poem. very deep. ok thats pretty much it, I'll think of something really cool to say as soon as I hit submit review.
whoa,... cool poem. very deep. ok thats pretty much it, I'll think of something really cool to say as soon as I hit submit review.
6/6/2002 c1 1knotted.dreamery
Wow, that was really nice. Depressing though =( Yet, anyways, it was awesome! Congratulations on the anniversary!
And also, I was just wondering, I'm now getting together my site and adding stories and poems to it. I loooved yours, it kinda does relate to me, so could I possibly put it on my site? Let me know, If you don't want to then that's perfectly fine.
Again, Nice job!
1knotted.dreameryWow, that was really nice. Depressing though =( Yet, anyways, it was awesome! Congratulations on the anniversary!
And also, I was just wondering, I'm now getting together my site and adding stories and poems to it. I loooved yours, it kinda does relate to me, so could I possibly put it on my site? Let me know, If you don't want to then that's perfectly fine.
Again, Nice job!