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2/17/2005 c1 16Wing Chant
Good job, Henry! You showed that evil boss who's REALLY incharge! ^_^ Yayness! That boss needs to behind bars! Omg! XD Good work!
10/20/2002 c1 Lil1
This is nice...really nice...I love this one...Poor Mr. Riles! *evil laughter* I'd do the same to uh...*looks at back* Okay it's getting dark-I REALLY NEED TO STUDY! YOU'RE A GREAT DISTRACTION! :) I LOVE YOUR STORIES!
9/28/2002 c1 colin perkins
Grate story. It really reminded me of Fight Club. I enjoyed it.
9/29/2000 c1 TAnder
Searching for a point to the story. You give too many details and nothing is left for the reader to figure out, (for example Mr Riley and his abusive personality). Give the reader something to anticipate...maybe Henry does not know why he is getting yelled at, and is getting fired for some 'injustice'. Most of all, please work on your grammar. Poor grammar will make people run...good luck

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