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4/14/2009 c1 1crazyman12
I love the simplicity of this poem. The irregularity of how you placed the words added emphasis to the last two lines, making them seem as important as you might have wanted them to be :) I agree, beauty is in hands and what those hands do. Great work!

~Habs :)

p.s. I wrote a poem on hands myself. If you have the time could you please give me some feedback on it? I would appreciate it a lot :) It's called "Hands, Birds"

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