for The Price of Freedom6/29/2002 c1 
23Lornyl Mahtsae
Your poetry is truly beautiful, the meanings are overwhelmingly deep and simply beautiful in all it's essence. I love it! You are going on to my favorite authors list...
~Lornyl
PS:would you try to review my stuff? I'd really appreciate it!
Beautiful work!
23Lornyl MahtsaeYour poetry is truly beautiful, the meanings are overwhelmingly deep and simply beautiful in all it's essence. I love it! You are going on to my favorite authors list...
~Lornyl
PS:would you try to review my stuff? I'd really appreciate it!
Beautiful work!
6/8/2002 c1 50annamarya
Fascinating. Its utterly fascinating how one can take on so much responsibilty for others. I love the use of imagery and the magnetic philosophy. I can completely agree with this and relate with its exhausation. The ending seems a little taut though, left me a bit unsatisfied, loning for more disappointment I guess. In any case, bravo!
50annamaryaFascinating. Its utterly fascinating how one can take on so much responsibilty for others. I love the use of imagery and the magnetic philosophy. I can completely agree with this and relate with its exhausation. The ending seems a little taut though, left me a bit unsatisfied, loning for more disappointment I guess. In any case, bravo!