for Rose-scented peace10/7/2002 c1 JazzPizza
A message of difficulty, perseverance, and hope, all within a descriptive metaphor.
And you know how to use your grammar.
You're so lucky you're not here right now, or I just might hug you.
(Sorry, I'm on an ongoing search for poets with potential, for some reason. And y'know...it's tough when you're picky.)
Anyway, keep up the good work.
A message of difficulty, perseverance, and hope, all within a descriptive metaphor.
And you know how to use your grammar.
You're so lucky you're not here right now, or I just might hug you.
(Sorry, I'm on an ongoing search for poets with potential, for some reason. And y'know...it's tough when you're picky.)
Anyway, keep up the good work.
7/15/2002 c1 
23Lornyl Mahtsae
I like this poem alot, interestingly intricate. And I thank you many times for your reveiws, Who doesn't like getting new reviews?
About the Sept. 11th one. I like your thoughts on that, and I agree, not everyone over there is a terrorist, and they too are innocents, and it's sad. :(
I'm glad you have new stuff up! I just love your things!
~Lornie
PS:I was gonna say sumthin else, but I can't remember it! Agh!
23Lornyl MahtsaeI like this poem alot, interestingly intricate. And I thank you many times for your reveiws, Who doesn't like getting new reviews?
About the Sept. 11th one. I like your thoughts on that, and I agree, not everyone over there is a terrorist, and they too are innocents, and it's sad. :(
I'm glad you have new stuff up! I just love your things!
~Lornie
PS:I was gonna say sumthin else, but I can't remember it! Agh!