for A Thousand Storms12/3/2002 c1 Solfires Shadow
Good poem, a very nice insight on love. I completely agress with the last two lines. Overall a very pleasant poem, always nice to read a few in this world that is becoming over run be negative themes.
Good poem, a very nice insight on love. I completely agress with the last two lines. Overall a very pleasant poem, always nice to read a few in this world that is becoming over run be negative themes.
10/11/2002 c1 
6Toad-Frog
Good piece. Thanks for the review on What am I? Another hint it has to do with measuring for instance think of water. K/Writing
6Toad-FrogGood piece. Thanks for the review on What am I? Another hint it has to do with measuring for instance think of water. K/Writing
9/15/2002 c1 Wasting Time
some of the rhymin seemsforcd, so try and just let it flow a bit beter. But, all together, I see nothing truybad about the poem, and it is good, and a good idea. Keep it up!
-Jessie
some of the rhymin seemsforcd, so try and just let it flow a bit beter. But, all together, I see nothing truybad about the poem, and it is good, and a good idea. Keep it up!
-Jessie
9/6/2002 c1 7Khalida
Good, the ryhmes seem kind of forced, but it's alright. I suggest you try to get the meter down better, so that it flows well. It's still a good poem, you like writing about this type of "religious" or "moral" stuff, don't you? Great, keep it up and try to work a little on meter and ryhme. Good start!
7KhalidaGood, the ryhmes seem kind of forced, but it's alright. I suggest you try to get the meter down better, so that it flows well. It's still a good poem, you like writing about this type of "religious" or "moral" stuff, don't you? Great, keep it up and try to work a little on meter and ryhme. Good start!
7/25/2002 c1 fed-ex
that was beautiful infact i think you should keep writing
that was beautiful infact i think you should keep writing
7/13/2002 c1 turtle
wow is all i can say! That was an excellent poem! ... i thought so! keep up the good work!
luz ya!
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wow is all i can say! That was an excellent poem! ... i thought so! keep up the good work!
luz ya!
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