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12/23/2004 c1 9Meaningless Julia
This reminds me of "The Charge of the Light Brigade" with the use of repetition. Might I suggest this could work nicely if you wrote it in free verse? A modern form for a more modern warfare? Just a suggestion. I like this, though. You write well.

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