for I'll Be Wearing Red7/22/2002 c1 
1Slow Like Honey
Like the story so far, but why exactly does she hate men so much? Write more please!
~ToRa
1Slow Like HoneyLike the story so far, but why exactly does she hate men so much? Write more please!
~ToRa
6/29/2002 c1 No longer using this account
Interesting start, its' good to see more and more stories starting by setting up the scene instead of just leaping straight into the action.
Although I feel that this chapter was ended rather aburtly. Anyway that aside down to the basics, spelling and grammer I see no fault with and sentices are structured well. Keep on writing.
Grim Writter
Interesting start, its' good to see more and more stories starting by setting up the scene instead of just leaping straight into the action.
Although I feel that this chapter was ended rather aburtly. Anyway that aside down to the basics, spelling and grammer I see no fault with and sentices are structured well. Keep on writing.
Grim Writter