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for Chris's story: Part 3

2/14/2014 c1 xxx1000
Interesting story. Was amused.
5/26/2013 c1 Firiel
Kind of fun. Needs some polishing. Some things don't add up. Who is "E.T."? Why is Debbie talking nervous "like-like" talk to her long-lost brother? Isn't the suddenly defecting alien just a little too convenient? Why would the aliens only pick up one human? Why would they go to such pains to acquire an extensive zoo and then cheerfully kill their shipload of captives? What heroic part did Chris actually play in the final battle? Some concepts, like life-restoration, are also introduced rather too suddenly and conveniently.

However, the story is certainly lively and action-packed (possibly even a bit too much so...). Keep writing!
7/31/2006 c1 2kawaiii
cool!
7/15/2006 c1 1sulkahlee
Interesting story. Keep writing.
5/26/2001 c1 loradion
Wow. I really liked the story. It included many different emotions. I enjoyed it very much.

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