for I Think You've Changed8/20/2004 c1 Ephemeral Seraphim
Wonderfully written, and the emotions here are captured and portrayed effectively. I like your writing style. It fascinates me and compells me to read more of your stuff. Keep up the wonderful work. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo
Wonderfully written, and the emotions here are captured and portrayed effectively. I like your writing style. It fascinates me and compells me to read more of your stuff. Keep up the wonderful work. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo
1/28/2004 c1 Arrow Windwhistler
That was really well done! I can't write poetry for...nevermind, but I said before, that was really good.
That was really well done! I can't write poetry for...nevermind, but I said before, that was really good.
1/28/2004 c1 
118origamikitty
I think there may have been a deeper meaning to the poem that I was not able to grasp, even after re-reading it, which is not a bad thing. I enjoyed it and hope to read more from you soon. If you have time to r&r some of my poems sometime, that'd be great!
118origamikittyI think there may have been a deeper meaning to the poem that I was not able to grasp, even after re-reading it, which is not a bad thing. I enjoyed it and hope to read more from you soon. If you have time to r&r some of my poems sometime, that'd be great!
1/7/2001 c1 1Tualha
Ooh! Good-o! Neat-o and keen! Oh, and I won't laugh at you...well...maybe I will, but not very much! No, that's not true either...
1TualhaOoh! Good-o! Neat-o and keen! Oh, and I won't laugh at you...well...maybe I will, but not very much! No, that's not true either...
12/31/2000 c1 7Churinga
This is sad.. and sweet.. you know? Bittersweet. Ah, yes. That's the word. I like it very much.. Don't believe anyone who says you're not good at poetry, because you are - everything you write touches me deeply.
7ChuringaThis is sad.. and sweet.. you know? Bittersweet. Ah, yes. That's the word. I like it very much.. Don't believe anyone who says you're not good at poetry, because you are - everything you write touches me deeply.
10/11/2000 c1 11Animorphalite
Ohhhhhh, cool. Is this about some singer, say...Britney Spears? ::Ducks as rotten tomatos are flung at her:: Hey, it was just a suggestion.
11AnimorphaliteOhhhhhh, cool. Is this about some singer, say...Britney Spears? ::Ducks as rotten tomatos are flung at her:: Hey, it was just a suggestion.
10/4/2000 c1 Mariposa F. B. P. Basisrecheneinheit
I feel the need to be a responsible reader tonight, so I'm writing this review. I suck at reviews. That's a fact. I really don't know what to say. I like it, but then I like all your poetry. So what else is there to say? Besides, "!"
I feel the need to be a responsible reader tonight, so I'm writing this review. I suck at reviews. That's a fact. I really don't know what to say. I like it, but then I like all your poetry. So what else is there to say? Besides, "!"
10/2/2000 c1 Meagan
This is so insightful. I know a girl who feels exactly like this.
This is so insightful. I know a girl who feels exactly like this.
10/1/2000 c1 2Walks-the-Umbra
You know, this is rather reflective of something I just went through not that long ago. Techinically, I'm still dealing with it. Nice job on capturing emotions, and keep up the good poetic wok.
2Walks-the-UmbraYou know, this is rather reflective of something I just went through not that long ago. Techinically, I'm still dealing with it. Nice job on capturing emotions, and keep up the good poetic wok.
10/1/2000 c1 12Jennifer Ever Zero
Ouch. That was...disturbing. As always, I love how you write...but that one just hit me right *here*. I dare you to do it again. Write another one.
12Jennifer Ever ZeroOuch. That was...disturbing. As always, I love how you write...but that one just hit me right *here*. I dare you to do it again. Write another one.
10/1/2000 c1 Julie Weasley
wow!
wow!