for I'm not Stupid1/24/2003 c1 
3jinXed
i really love the ending. powerful and well-written, that's how i would describe your work... you are a great writer.
3jinXedi really love the ending. powerful and well-written, that's how i would describe your work... you are a great writer.
12/11/2002 c1 12Legless-Catapillar
Thankyou for your review, you are very kind. I really like this poem especially the last lines, very touching. I'm guessing most of these are written from personal experience? I can definately relate to some of them..
12Legless-CatapillarThankyou for your review, you are very kind. I really like this poem especially the last lines, very touching. I'm guessing most of these are written from personal experience? I can definately relate to some of them..
9/4/2002 c1 Jinx
I said in an earlier review that some people force rhyme and rhythm into a poem when the poem doesn't need it. This one needed it. The rhyme is pronounced and yet not over done and thr rhythm subtle to give a balance. I like the views you used in this. I believe I can tell a lot about people by what they write and the more I find about you, the more I like.
I said in an earlier review that some people force rhyme and rhythm into a poem when the poem doesn't need it. This one needed it. The rhyme is pronounced and yet not over done and thr rhythm subtle to give a balance. I like the views you used in this. I believe I can tell a lot about people by what they write and the more I find about you, the more I like.
8/28/2002 c1 19splodgey
wow realy good ^_^
this story reminds me of the saying "life is like a box of chocolates you never know what you're going to get" i don't know why it just does and allso to believe in yourself and never doubt your heart and the way you feel. thankyou for such a wonderful story :)splodgey:)
19splodgeywow realy good ^_^
this story reminds me of the saying "life is like a box of chocolates you never know what you're going to get" i don't know why it just does and allso to believe in yourself and never doubt your heart and the way you feel. thankyou for such a wonderful story :)splodgey:)
8/26/2002 c1 I prefer to remain nameless
I like this poem. Infact I think it is one of the better things you have written and one of the better things on fanfic. It's good. I like the structure and the subtle change at the end of the piece. Without sounding pretentious or like a silly child trying to gain friends, which I assure you I am not, have you tried to get any of your work published?
I like this poem. Infact I think it is one of the better things you have written and one of the better things on fanfic. It's good. I like the structure and the subtle change at the end of the piece. Without sounding pretentious or like a silly child trying to gain friends, which I assure you I am not, have you tried to get any of your work published?
7/14/2002 c1 Megan
This is so cool. Soz it's a naff review but I think your works are amazing
This is so cool. Soz it's a naff review but I think your works are amazing