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5/27/2007 c1 wyckydgoddess
nice

:)
8/13/2002 c1 32Adrienne D
The same goes with this one - most of my comments are written on the copies you gave me. Anyway, overall this was pretty good. I had a few qualms, but those are discussed on the edited copies. My favourite lines are:

"A carpet of pine needles

Presses soft against my feet;

A branch strokes my face

Like the hand of my mother"

and

"Each day is a bud

That opens into a beautiful flower."

Wonderful imagery throughout the entire thing. You've got talent, Erin. ~*~Adrienne

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