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4/3/2004 c1 20darksiren1
The theme of this one...seems similar to the other one i read. i really like that last bit, but i think it could be better if you didnt outright say your life was a performance. but i dont really know anything about poetry so..i probably would not take my advice. i like however the picture it gives me of a little girl standing alone on stage waiting for the velvet curtain to drop.
9/7/2002 c1 52Munku-JGSPTV
OMIGOSH! This is such a great poem! Wow! This really grabs me! I'm gonna re-read it..again..again... just-wow
8/21/2002 c1 2Little Brat
deffinately true. it does seem that life is like a stage sometimes and all you do is perform for other people.
8/20/2002 c1 6Blue Peanut
Very good! Very true also, this poem could be interpreted with so many different meanings...great job!
7/31/2002 c1 Wasting Time
wonderful poem, just like everything you do is a show for other people, awesome job

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7/21/2002 c1 15Jen Drake
Great poem. I feel the same way...
7/19/2002 c1 10kermit
Great! I understand what this poem presents. Really good potential as a poet. Thankyou for reviewing my stuff by the way. Your comments mean a lot to me... LOTS OF LOVE... KERMIT xxx
7/19/2002 c1 3TFG
OMG! I love this poem! It's soooo good! I like the whole idea of it! Of how their life is like an act or performance! That's really good! I mean it! Love the poem!

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