for Battle for Earth7/22/2002 c3 Lucretia Mc Evil
You've read way too much Anne McCaffery. This is just as hard to follow and drab as one of her novels, not to mention the fact that you haven't bothered to even create your own universe. You've used hers and just changed the names of everything. If you're absolutely sure you have to rip off an author, the least you could do is pick a good one.
You've read way too much Anne McCaffery. This is just as hard to follow and drab as one of her novels, not to mention the fact that you haven't bothered to even create your own universe. You've used hers and just changed the names of everything. If you're absolutely sure you have to rip off an author, the least you could do is pick a good one.
7/18/2002 c1 CRM114
Hmmmm. I like the psychic idea, only because I find the idea of pre-cognitive human beings to be of great interest, not only for myself, but for the human race as a whole.
Unfortunately for you, your story is mediocre, poorly written, undiscriptive, and (well) really drab and boring. Thanks for inviting me to Review. Cheers folks.
Hmmmm. I like the psychic idea, only because I find the idea of pre-cognitive human beings to be of great interest, not only for myself, but for the human race as a whole.
Unfortunately for you, your story is mediocre, poorly written, undiscriptive, and (well) really drab and boring. Thanks for inviting me to Review. Cheers folks.
7/18/2002 c1 starsknight
Interesting concept and beginning. I'd like to see where this goes. I also have a couple of suggestions that might make the passage flow smoother; if you are interested, e-mail me.
Interesting concept and beginning. I'd like to see where this goes. I also have a couple of suggestions that might make the passage flow smoother; if you are interested, e-mail me.