for WHY?6/15/2005 c1 
18Ice Eyes
Absolutely amazing that pinpoints exactly what i went through a year ago or so, funny thing is though...things got incredibly better, yet i never would have guessed it at the time. but still nicely done.
~Ice Eyes
18Ice EyesAbsolutely amazing that pinpoints exactly what i went through a year ago or so, funny thing is though...things got incredibly better, yet i never would have guessed it at the time. but still nicely done.
~Ice Eyes
11/23/2002 c1 24Rhea-lyze
This is really good. Good expression of anger, and I like the conflict of I hate you/I want you/I love you. I definately know what that feels like.
24Rhea-lyzeThis is really good. Good expression of anger, and I like the conflict of I hate you/I want you/I love you. I definately know what that feels like.
10/19/2002 c1 64Black Tangled Heart
the jumbled emotions convey a very plausible piece...i really like it.
64Black Tangled Heartthe jumbled emotions convey a very plausible piece...i really like it.
9/27/2002 c1 xurbandecayx
That was brilliant! I'm really impressed... impressed so much that it's even going on my tres prestigious Fave Stories list! :D
I think we can all completely relate to that, everyone is beautiful when you can't have them. What can I say? Life's a bitch, and then you die. I'm trying not to be such a pessimist, but... anyway.
On another note, (and now you can know what a truly huge wanker I am...) did you really think my story was good? Are you serious? You must be criminally insane... Oh well. I'm trying to write with more descript, but... I don't know that I'm there yet. Anyways, I just want to say a MASSIVE thanks to you for supporting me along the way, and reading all of my crazy stoner-kid crap. Cheers!
That was brilliant! I'm really impressed... impressed so much that it's even going on my tres prestigious Fave Stories list! :D
I think we can all completely relate to that, everyone is beautiful when you can't have them. What can I say? Life's a bitch, and then you die. I'm trying not to be such a pessimist, but... anyway.
On another note, (and now you can know what a truly huge wanker I am...) did you really think my story was good? Are you serious? You must be criminally insane... Oh well. I'm trying to write with more descript, but... I don't know that I'm there yet. Anyways, I just want to say a MASSIVE thanks to you for supporting me along the way, and reading all of my crazy stoner-kid crap. Cheers!
9/7/2002 c1 52Munku-JGSPTV
Woah! All the emtions are really tied in here! This is excellent! I really like it. And I think the biggest question in our lives will always be 'why's
52Munku-JGSPTVWoah! All the emtions are really tied in here! This is excellent! I really like it. And I think the biggest question in our lives will always be 'why's
8/26/2002 c1 20monsterbreaker
That is exactly somethign that happened to me! I mean...word for word. That is amazing, I absolutly LOVE IT!
~me~
20monsterbreakerThat is exactly somethign that happened to me! I mean...word for word. That is amazing, I absolutly LOVE IT!
~me~
8/21/2002 c1 2Little Brat
i love it. that's all i have to say! it's so pretty. something i can relate to
2Little Brati love it. that's all i have to say! it's so pretty. something i can relate to
8/17/2002 c1 63Lisa Robinson
Wow. All the mixing emotions make his poem really great. Great job again Ms.Cools!
63Lisa RobinsonWow. All the mixing emotions make his poem really great. Great job again Ms.Cools!
8/7/2002 c1 113tarnished oversoul
i really like this poem and all it's conflicting emotions. (In my opinion- that is what makes a great poem- those often conflicting human emotions.)
I like, love, adore you
TO
113tarnished oversouli really like this poem and all it's conflicting emotions. (In my opinion- that is what makes a great poem- those often conflicting human emotions.)
I like, love, adore you
TO
7/28/2002 c1 6BCLover6
Hey this is pretty good, oh yeah and sorry shameless advertisement: Read and review Lea please it would really make me happy...hehe...
6BCLover6Hey this is pretty good, oh yeah and sorry shameless advertisement: Read and review Lea please it would really make me happy...hehe...
7/23/2002 c1 7Angelgirlie805
wow that was really great I haev poems of my emotional outburts when I'm ahveing a bad day I just dont post them lol anyway yeah that was great it sorta lets me feel what you feel in a way. Well thanks for reviewing my poem I'm glad that you liked it lol anyway keep up your good wrting k lol bye bye
7Angelgirlie805wow that was really great I haev poems of my emotional outburts when I'm ahveing a bad day I just dont post them lol anyway yeah that was great it sorta lets me feel what you feel in a way. Well thanks for reviewing my poem I'm glad that you liked it lol anyway keep up your good wrting k lol bye bye
7/23/2002 c1 2inconsequential me
Wow, that was an AMAZING poem...It was radiating with emotions and it describes somethings i never could...It made me really feel someone's hatred against herself and longing for this missed opportunity...Anyway, it was excellent! A magnificent read! You are an amazing poet! I thank you for providing me with such an amazing poem! kudos!
2inconsequential meWow, that was an AMAZING poem...It was radiating with emotions and it describes somethings i never could...It made me really feel someone's hatred against herself and longing for this missed opportunity...Anyway, it was excellent! A magnificent read! You are an amazing poet! I thank you for providing me with such an amazing poem! kudos!