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6/17/2008 c1 18AtlantisGirl12
Ooh...this is really good! I especially loved the second half since I have felt exactly like that. The only thing I didn't get was this part: "I stand in the midst Off all the crowd"-perhaps you meant "of" instead? I wasn't sure.

Anyway, beautiful poem! It's interesting to me that no matter how many people use this theme (including myself), each one has their own unique version.
7/2/2004 c1 AnotherFace
8/30/2002 c1 12Aries28
Despite the fact that the idea is used over and over, its still a nice poem, because it is equally true every time.
7/27/2002 c1 4Firebolt -2002
it's okay.. be better... you can.. i love it... nevertheless
7/21/2002 c1 34miss meaningeverythingtome
wow. that was great, and I can definitely relate. You're very talented. Thanks for reviewing too. :)
7/20/2002 c1 98hurtmushroom
awww that's so sad!
7/20/2002 c1 17Jade6
This is wonderful... it is sad thoigh but I think we can all relate! Wonderful job!

ps - thanks for your reviews! =)
7/19/2002 c1 48Sun Chime
Hey... I have a poem on the same subject AND mine has the line "alone in the crowd" as well! Cool...we were born to be best friends. Awesome work pal! You are so damn...TUSI!
7/18/2002 c1 28Shadowgirl
Nice poem! I really like the emotion that you embody in the poem. I liked how it started to rhyme, I also liked the line "strangling my cry". The last three lines also wrap up the poem nicely.
7/18/2002 c1 Feral Imp
Wow. Echos of last fall at my school, in that poem. Ryan - my longtime love - decided (For reasons still unknown to me) to abandon me at the beginning of seventh grade. Very good. This poem captures the angst of going unnoticed.

~Regeane Silveria

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