for Alone in the crowd6/17/2008 c1 
18AtlantisGirl12
Ooh...this is really good! I especially loved the second half since I have felt exactly like that. The only thing I didn't get was this part: "I stand in the midst Off all the crowd"-perhaps you meant "of" instead? I wasn't sure.
Anyway, beautiful poem! It's interesting to me that no matter how many people use this theme (including myself), each one has their own unique version.
18AtlantisGirl12Ooh...this is really good! I especially loved the second half since I have felt exactly like that. The only thing I didn't get was this part: "I stand in the midst Off all the crowd"-perhaps you meant "of" instead? I wasn't sure.
Anyway, beautiful poem! It's interesting to me that no matter how many people use this theme (including myself), each one has their own unique version.
8/30/2002 c1 12Aries28
Despite the fact that the idea is used over and over, its still a nice poem, because it is equally true every time.
12Aries28Despite the fact that the idea is used over and over, its still a nice poem, because it is equally true every time.
7/21/2002 c1 34miss meaningeverythingtome
wow. that was great, and I can definitely relate. You're very talented. Thanks for reviewing too. :)
34miss meaningeverythingtomewow. that was great, and I can definitely relate. You're very talented. Thanks for reviewing too. :)
7/20/2002 c1 17Jade6
This is wonderful... it is sad thoigh but I think we can all relate! Wonderful job!
ps - thanks for your reviews! =)
17Jade6This is wonderful... it is sad thoigh but I think we can all relate! Wonderful job!
ps - thanks for your reviews! =)
7/19/2002 c1 48Sun Chime
Hey... I have a poem on the same subject AND mine has the line "alone in the crowd" as well! Cool...we were born to be best friends. Awesome work pal! You are so damn...TUSI!
48Sun ChimeHey... I have a poem on the same subject AND mine has the line "alone in the crowd" as well! Cool...we were born to be best friends. Awesome work pal! You are so damn...TUSI!
7/18/2002 c1 28Shadowgirl
Nice poem! I really like the emotion that you embody in the poem. I liked how it started to rhyme, I also liked the line "strangling my cry". The last three lines also wrap up the poem nicely.
28ShadowgirlNice poem! I really like the emotion that you embody in the poem. I liked how it started to rhyme, I also liked the line "strangling my cry". The last three lines also wrap up the poem nicely.
7/18/2002 c1 Feral Imp
Wow. Echos of last fall at my school, in that poem. Ryan - my longtime love - decided (For reasons still unknown to me) to abandon me at the beginning of seventh grade. Very good. This poem captures the angst of going unnoticed.
~Regeane Silveria
Wow. Echos of last fall at my school, in that poem. Ryan - my longtime love - decided (For reasons still unknown to me) to abandon me at the beginning of seventh grade. Very good. This poem captures the angst of going unnoticed.
~Regeane Silveria