for Of Tea Time9/15/2002 c5 Taco1
hee hee! I love Taife. He's so cool! And the queen, and her manners obsession! This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!
hee hee! I love Taife. He's so cool! And the queen, and her manners obsession! This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!
9/12/2002 c4 
38Lucy Hawthorne
Do you like the queen or are you just mocking her queenliness? I can't figure it out. I love this story so far, but the chapters are so short. *jumps around madly while trying to pull out hair* and the worst part is that I can't do anything about it. poo. Well, keep going will ya? This is getting good
38Lucy HawthorneDo you like the queen or are you just mocking her queenliness? I can't figure it out. I love this story so far, but the chapters are so short. *jumps around madly while trying to pull out hair* and the worst part is that I can't do anything about it. poo. Well, keep going will ya? This is getting good
9/7/2002 c4 Taco1
*Puts hands on hips* I can't beleive I never read this before! I've missed out on so much wonderful reading! *puts into favorites* Thar she be! NOw I don't havew to worry about losing this story! hehehe. Now, _this_ is finally something on ff worth publishing. *claps* I would definately pay to read this. But then, what else do we expect from you, White Rabbit?
Now updaties soon, my dearie!
*Puts hands on hips* I can't beleive I never read this before! I've missed out on so much wonderful reading! *puts into favorites* Thar she be! NOw I don't havew to worry about losing this story! hehehe. Now, _this_ is finally something on ff worth publishing. *claps* I would definately pay to read this. But then, what else do we expect from you, White Rabbit?
Now updaties soon, my dearie!
9/6/2002 c4 Kayun
XD Rhen and Aayah, they're interesting, they are.
XD Rhen and Aayah, they're interesting, they are.
9/6/2002 c4 35Bunnylicious
*organizes a sit in among the readers* WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! heheheh. This is REALLY good! I love how this is blossoming. Bravo!
35Bunnylicious*organizes a sit in among the readers* WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! heheheh. This is REALLY good! I love how this is blossoming. Bravo!
9/6/2002 c3 Bunnylicious
oooh. Mindgaming. Fun stuff! Very cool, as usual, the mooning was an ::Ahem:: *interesting touch. :-P
oooh. Mindgaming. Fun stuff! Very cool, as usual, the mooning was an ::Ahem:: *interesting touch. :-P
9/4/2002 c3 38Lucy Hawthorne
very nice. This is very good. although to chapters are short. I keep expecting something longer, but it never happens...poo. oh well, I'll get over it.
38Lucy Hawthornevery nice. This is very good. although to chapters are short. I keep expecting something longer, but it never happens...poo. oh well, I'll get over it.
9/4/2002 c2 Lucy Hawthorne
heehee, I really like this. It makes me laugh, especially in the first chapter when you put down the laughing dust mites. Cute, very, very cute! On to the next chapter...
heehee, I really like this. It makes me laugh, especially in the first chapter when you put down the laughing dust mites. Cute, very, very cute! On to the next chapter...
9/3/2002 c1 Lucy Hawthorne
I think the Novel section in crused, but that's just me. I'll read this latter, it sounds good, but for now, I must take a shower and become one with my bed. YAY! goodnight.
I think the Novel section in crused, but that's just me. I'll read this latter, it sounds good, but for now, I must take a shower and become one with my bed. YAY! goodnight.
8/16/2002 c2 Sellie Kaprix
White Rabbit, my child, get on wirra storee! We wanna storee, PWEEEZE?
Actually, excellent stuff-very funny, and I have a feeling that the Queen is a little more than meets the eye (I like the Queen... I do hope you aren't planning to kill her or anything!). Taife is hilariously witty, and Ari has a way with her.
Your prose flows well, with the exception of a few awkward words that strike my inner ear oddly (I keep tearing my hair when I see that "smirked" at the end of the first chapter... picky little thing, aren't I?). There's something about it that's a little different... I guess it's your style (it's always buried there somewhere, even in a pastiche). Nice, anyway.
And I want to be a dust mite! Yeee! ^_^
White Rabbit, my child, get on wirra storee! We wanna storee, PWEEEZE?
Actually, excellent stuff-very funny, and I have a feeling that the Queen is a little more than meets the eye (I like the Queen... I do hope you aren't planning to kill her or anything!). Taife is hilariously witty, and Ari has a way with her.
Your prose flows well, with the exception of a few awkward words that strike my inner ear oddly (I keep tearing my hair when I see that "smirked" at the end of the first chapter... picky little thing, aren't I?). There's something about it that's a little different... I guess it's your style (it's always buried there somewhere, even in a pastiche). Nice, anyway.
And I want to be a dust mite! Yeee! ^_^
8/15/2002 c2 Bunnylicious
Hey- this is really cool. I like the plot so far, its amusing as well. kudos to you!
Hey- this is really cool. I like the plot so far, its amusing as well. kudos to you!
8/11/2002 c2 Zoe
*points finger* CLIFFHANGER CLIFFHANGER CLIFFHANGER! WRITE! NOW!
*points finger* CLIFFHANGER CLIFFHANGER CLIFFHANGER! WRITE! NOW!
8/11/2002 c1 Zoe
oooooooooooooooooooo I'm intriged...
oooooooooooooooooooo I'm intriged...
8/7/2002 c2 10MysteriousWriter
Brilliant! Absolutly Brilliant! Only a ver very mad person could come up with such and absurdly clever story! And I do enjoy romances! I hope they get together!
p.s. I took your advice and made a few brakes! Your like my very own editor!
10MysteriousWriterBrilliant! Absolutly Brilliant! Only a ver very mad person could come up with such and absurdly clever story! And I do enjoy romances! I hope they get together!
p.s. I took your advice and made a few brakes! Your like my very own editor!
7/23/2002 c1 Miss Juliet
hey rae,
Great story. Clever. Just as always...hee hee. keep writing, you're good. I hope you get this review, i think you will though...
Miss Juliet
hey rae,
Great story. Clever. Just as always...hee hee. keep writing, you're good. I hope you get this review, i think you will though...
Miss Juliet