for The Dragon Box6/23/2003 c2 Rachel
Risky's a stallion right? stallions are male lol. or did i just get confused? rofl ^^. great story...i like it a lot =).
Risky's a stallion right? stallions are male lol. or did i just get confused? rofl ^^. great story...i like it a lot =).
1/30/2003 c9 
2Jack Dawkins
As always, I love your story! Sorry I haven't been around for awhile, please update soon! - Aesa
2Jack DawkinsAs always, I love your story! Sorry I haven't been around for awhile, please update soon! - Aesa
11/12/2002 c7 Jack Dawkins
Half Elf! I adore this story. Sorry, I didn't notice you had updated but now I'm happy... I think that it is advancing very well. I love the new character but you should do some more character development with the boy, Taktoon. He could really be great if you let him! Umm... other than that, I think it's about time for more clarification in your story, maybe you could start to explain more of the history behind this world. Basically, I love where this is going. Please keep it up!
Half Elf! I adore this story. Sorry, I didn't notice you had updated but now I'm happy... I think that it is advancing very well. I love the new character but you should do some more character development with the boy, Taktoon. He could really be great if you let him! Umm... other than that, I think it's about time for more clarification in your story, maybe you could start to explain more of the history behind this world. Basically, I love where this is going. Please keep it up!
9/9/2002 c5 Jack Dawkins
Good work! I like the character development, and the story line. It's getting much better. I would absolutely adore this story if there were to be some romance later... not necessarily between Ekomaus and Sitka, just random romance would do! I like the elf dude.. BTW: to read about elf gang wars, check out the book "The last Hot time" at a library, it's a great book and I thin kyou'd like it! Keep writing! I love what I read! Sayonara! Aesa
Good work! I like the character development, and the story line. It's getting much better. I would absolutely adore this story if there were to be some romance later... not necessarily between Ekomaus and Sitka, just random romance would do! I like the elf dude.. BTW: to read about elf gang wars, check out the book "The last Hot time" at a library, it's a great book and I thin kyou'd like it! Keep writing! I love what I read! Sayonara! Aesa
9/6/2002 c5 10White Rabbit4
o.O Zowie, this is getting better and better as the plot moves along! I love the descriptions of your characters, especially the elves, Ekomaus, and the old man. (The chappie who hates Carther with a will. Yes. Him. XD) Mmmm...descriptions...mmm.. Lovely descriptions. I think it was the second chapter (?) that is slightly hurried along. Maybe put some more in there. I'm really interested. Must...read more prettiness ...yesness ...wheeeee! I love this. *toddles off to fave list*
PS: Have you read THE LAST DRAGONLORD? 'Cause the dragon is quite similar. That's an awesome book, if you skip over certain scenes.
PPS: Thanks for all the lovely reviews of TEA TIME. They are most appreciated. *feels all happy and stuff*
10White Rabbit4o.O Zowie, this is getting better and better as the plot moves along! I love the descriptions of your characters, especially the elves, Ekomaus, and the old man. (The chappie who hates Carther with a will. Yes. Him. XD) Mmmm...descriptions...mmm.. Lovely descriptions. I think it was the second chapter (?) that is slightly hurried along. Maybe put some more in there. I'm really interested. Must...read more prettiness ...yesness ...wheeeee! I love this. *toddles off to fave list*
PS: Have you read THE LAST DRAGONLORD? 'Cause the dragon is quite similar. That's an awesome book, if you skip over certain scenes.
PPS: Thanks for all the lovely reviews of TEA TIME. They are most appreciated. *feels all happy and stuff*
8/30/2002 c4 2Jack Dawkins
Ahhh, very nice. Thankyou for letting me know about the updat, I appreciate it! Ummm, I guess I'll wait for the rest of the chapter before offering advice ok. As a tip, if you want it, I force myself to sit and write when I'm uninspired. Eventually the writer's block goes away, or, I read and get new ideas. Just a suggestion! -Aesa
2Jack DawkinsAhhh, very nice. Thankyou for letting me know about the updat, I appreciate it! Ummm, I guess I'll wait for the rest of the chapter before offering advice ok. As a tip, if you want it, I force myself to sit and write when I'm uninspired. Eventually the writer's block goes away, or, I read and get new ideas. Just a suggestion! -Aesa
8/22/2002 c3 Jack Dawkins
Well, that is a really good start to an interesting story. I like your characters although I think that you may be hurrying the story a long a little. A few more descriptive details would really make this story top rate. I like Sitka's name. It's very fun. Other than that, keep up the good work, I like where this story is going! - Aesa
Well, that is a really good start to an interesting story. I like your characters although I think that you may be hurrying the story a long a little. A few more descriptive details would really make this story top rate. I like Sitka's name. It's very fun. Other than that, keep up the good work, I like where this story is going! - Aesa
8/19/2002 c2 10White Rabbit4
Oooh, most spifftastic indeed! Your writing is very, very polished. I especiallly like the conversation between the Pipesmoker and Sitka. Yay!
10White Rabbit4Oooh, most spifftastic indeed! Your writing is very, very polished. I especiallly like the conversation between the Pipesmoker and Sitka. Yay!
8/12/2002 c1 White Rabbit4
Oooh! Muchas nicey! I like! Excellent dialogue, and I love his complaint about the bluebirds and the weather being wrong! Most spiff! Let me know when you update!
Oooh! Muchas nicey! I like! Excellent dialogue, and I love his complaint about the bluebirds and the weather being wrong! Most spiff! Let me know when you update!