for The Wind2/3/2003 c1 
7Persimone
Nice Poem! I think its very unique to write about the wind as an enemy, I always loved the wind. Great poem anyway, conflicting views are great to hear!
~Persimone
7PersimoneNice Poem! I think its very unique to write about the wind as an enemy, I always loved the wind. Great poem anyway, conflicting views are great to hear!
~Persimone
10/20/2002 c1 31Piper Cub
I like the image I'm getting of the wind as a sprite with a puckish sense of humor. Very nice.
31Piper CubI like the image I'm getting of the wind as a sprite with a puckish sense of humor. Very nice.
10/13/2002 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
Oooo...I like this! I wrote a poem about the wind, too...it's called "The Airy Spirit". ^^ The wind is a fickle little bugger, isn't he?
Keep writing!
~Namir Swiftpaw
220Namir SwiftpawOooo...I like this! I wrote a poem about the wind, too...it's called "The Airy Spirit". ^^ The wind is a fickle little bugger, isn't he?
Keep writing!
~Namir Swiftpaw
10/10/2002 c1 Jedi Prophetess
I love the personification that you give. Keep up the writing. You go ahead and write things the way you want to. Don't take anything from anybody. ^_^
I love the personification that you give. Keep up the writing. You go ahead and write things the way you want to. Don't take anything from anybody. ^_^
8/24/2002 c1 Parsu's greatest enemy
Pretty cool. Some cool ideas in there.
Interesting Personification of the wind.
~Lub~
Goten's *ReAl* girlfriend
Pretty cool. Some cool ideas in there.
Interesting Personification of the wind.
~Lub~
Goten's *ReAl* girlfriend
8/17/2002 c1 52Munku-JGSPTV
Woah. I never really read any poetry where the wind was a moster thing. THis was good!
52Munku-JGSPTVWoah. I never really read any poetry where the wind was a moster thing. THis was good!
7/19/2002 c1 12Ayeka The Jurain Princess
I like the descriptions and all, but I don't want to put you down with my suggestion but this will hopefully help you. It's confusing. But I love it a lot ^_^
Sayonara and God Bless.
12Ayeka The Jurain PrincessI like the descriptions and all, but I don't want to put you down with my suggestion but this will hopefully help you. It's confusing. But I love it a lot ^_^
Sayonara and God Bless.