4/6/2015 c13 Lazerkat
I'M CRYING NOW. ARE YOU HAPPY?!
I loved this so much! Keep writing, because this is amazing!
I'M CRYING NOW. ARE YOU HAPPY?!
I loved this so much! Keep writing, because this is amazing!
2/22/2015 c14 2Harry Lizzy
I've just finished reading this story and this is probably the BEST story I've read in a long time! I absolutely love Aviah/Kaden - they are probably my favourite couple I've ever read about and I'm torn between laughing and crying at the banter between the two. I just love it! Amazing!
I've just finished reading this story and this is probably the BEST story I've read in a long time! I absolutely love Aviah/Kaden - they are probably my favourite couple I've ever read about and I'm torn between laughing and crying at the banter between the two. I just love it! Amazing!
7/16/2014 c8 Luna0814
So far, I really like what you've written and you're a really good writer! But I do have to say that Avi is really getting on my nerves with all her criticizing of EVERYTHING. But whatever, loved it! (Especially the last part)
So far, I really like what you've written and you're a really good writer! But I do have to say that Avi is really getting on my nerves with all her criticizing of EVERYTHING. But whatever, loved it! (Especially the last part)
8/8/2013 c1 The Angel of Rainbows
I think that this story seems very interesting.
It's a bit humorous which I tend to enjoy...
Nice Work.
I think that this story seems very interesting.
It's a bit humorous which I tend to enjoy...
Nice Work.
5/28/2013 c14 1MissKukyMonster
Great story! I was a little doubtful at first, but the writing got so much better towards the end. Very well written and enjoyable _
Great story! I was a little doubtful at first, but the writing got so much better towards the end. Very well written and enjoyable _
4/21/2013 c11 Guest
Agghhhh her painnnnnnn...
Agghhhh her painnnnnnn...
4/21/2013 c9 Guest
Ahhhhhhh!
Beautiful chapter..
Ahhhhhhh!
Beautiful chapter..
3/6/2013 c2 Guest
OuO
This is amazing!
OuO
This is amazing!
1/4/2013 c14 Julia
Wonderful! I had written a long review but it all dissapeared, so I'll simply tell you that this was a really marvelous story with all you could wish for :D
Wonderful! I had written a long review but it all dissapeared, so I'll simply tell you that this was a really marvelous story with all you could wish for :D
12/14/2012 c14 Guest
nice one
nice one
10/8/2012 c14 Amber Ice Fox
I'm so glad I stumbled upon your story! It was a great read and I'm looking forward to checking out your other works.
-Fox.
I'm so glad I stumbled upon your story! It was a great read and I'm looking forward to checking out your other works.
-Fox.