for I'm not ok12/16/2008 c1 
1FemaleJonas
that's good, very deep :)
there are a few times you wrote words without g's at the end ("endin") I understand what you meant it to sound like, but sometimes it's good to write endin' or losin'. Although I actually think the flow would've been fine in the poem WITH the g's
It's a great poem though, keep writing! :D
1FemaleJonasthat's good, very deep :)
there are a few times you wrote words without g's at the end ("endin") I understand what you meant it to sound like, but sometimes it's good to write endin' or losin'. Although I actually think the flow would've been fine in the poem WITH the g's
It's a great poem though, keep writing! :D
12/15/2008 c1 29They Call Me Mimii
I connected with this so much. I've been dealin with this exact thing and all the stories about it are so WRONG they don't get the sentiment right. This poem does. Some of my poems are like this but not as good, reed if you please? :)
29They Call Me MimiiI connected with this so much. I've been dealin with this exact thing and all the stories about it are so WRONG they don't get the sentiment right. This poem does. Some of my poems are like this but not as good, reed if you please? :)
6/14/2006 c1 1hipbonesssx3
wow this is a great poem it really shows how I've been feeling lately now that some people are questioning my eating habits..I wish they'd leave me alone and yet i wish they'd help me..idk..just keep smiling =]
1hipbonesssx3wow this is a great poem it really shows how I've been feeling lately now that some people are questioning my eating habits..I wish they'd leave me alone and yet i wish they'd help me..idk..just keep smiling =]
12/25/2002 c1 72Magnificent Moi
mmmm...that's powerful. I really like the rhyming and it's very relatable.
72Magnificent Moimmmm...that's powerful. I really like the rhyming and it's very relatable.
10/31/2002 c1 119Silent Dreamer
as long as i have ana i'll always be ok. maybe not to others but always to myself. good poem i like it
119Silent Dreameras long as i have ana i'll always be ok. maybe not to others but always to myself. good poem i like it