for What Can Be Built Through All That Is Broken8/18/2003 c4 
32Arietti
*Scratches her head* Well, I'll admit I was a bit lost throughout pieces of this, but overall it was really really good! ^_^ You get better and better every time I read yer stuff, DA! Keep itup, and I can't wait for the next one!
~Ari
32Arietti*Scratches her head* Well, I'll admit I was a bit lost throughout pieces of this, but overall it was really really good! ^_^ You get better and better every time I read yer stuff, DA! Keep itup, and I can't wait for the next one!
~Ari
8/13/2003 c4 Tio Too lazy to log in
at long, long last, more of this most promising story...not much to say except that your characters are coming on so well and that i love the way the story is progresing! more soon! that long wait was torture!
at long, long last, more of this most promising story...not much to say except that your characters are coming on so well and that i love the way the story is progresing! more soon! that long wait was torture!
4/6/2003 c3 AfterTheRain
Wow. Amazing as usual, though it took a long time in getting to me. I would dearly love to see another delicious installment soon, preferably featuring the delightful Gabriel, as well as this Lord Jonathon fellow. Or are you teasing us? anyway, well done dear
Wow. Amazing as usual, though it took a long time in getting to me. I would dearly love to see another delicious installment soon, preferably featuring the delightful Gabriel, as well as this Lord Jonathon fellow. Or are you teasing us? anyway, well done dear
2/21/2003 c3 Arietti
*YAY!* I finished yer third Chapter now, DA! Loved this one just as much as the last two, but it wasn't until now that I discovered something. when you talk about Gabriel, the picture of him in my head is pretty nice. *laughs*
He's pretty fine! Anyways, I never knew you could write like this, and I'm so excited that I found out! *lol* Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Ari
*YAY!* I finished yer third Chapter now, DA! Loved this one just as much as the last two, but it wasn't until now that I discovered something. when you talk about Gabriel, the picture of him in my head is pretty nice. *laughs*
He's pretty fine! Anyways, I never knew you could write like this, and I'm so excited that I found out! *lol* Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Ari
2/20/2003 c3 43Carter Tachikawa
Hm.I was wondering what happened to this story. It's been a while since I heard from you in general. Anyway, it's still good as ever. I'd say more but I'm getting ready to get up and go home. Just keep up the good work. ~CT
43Carter TachikawaHm.I was wondering what happened to this story. It's been a while since I heard from you in general. Anyway, it's still good as ever. I'd say more but I'm getting ready to get up and go home. Just keep up the good work. ~CT
2/20/2003 c2 32Arietti
*Grins* What, WHAT? I TOLD you I'd read it! DIDN'T I? I promised! I'm only on chapter 2, but D/A, this is freakin' AWESOME! I love every word of it! Yer a wonderful writer! Now I see why Tio likes it so much. I'll be back for the other chapters this afternoon!
~Ari
32Arietti*Grins* What, WHAT? I TOLD you I'd read it! DIDN'T I? I promised! I'm only on chapter 2, but D/A, this is freakin' AWESOME! I love every word of it! Yer a wonderful writer! Now I see why Tio likes it so much. I'll be back for the other chapters this afternoon!
~Ari
2/19/2003 c3 16Voodoo Fyrefly
At long last!
I've been waiting so long and constantly checking back on this story, and i'm so pleased you updated it! Gabriel, as always, is a real charmer and I love him to bits. The plot is thickening, which I like, and i still can't wait to meet Lord Jonathon properly! My only problem with this chapter was the shortness.but i'm willing to over look that. Quality, not quantity, right? Great job, more soon!
~TIO
16Voodoo FyreflyAt long last!
I've been waiting so long and constantly checking back on this story, and i'm so pleased you updated it! Gabriel, as always, is a real charmer and I love him to bits. The plot is thickening, which I like, and i still can't wait to meet Lord Jonathon properly! My only problem with this chapter was the shortness.but i'm willing to over look that. Quality, not quantity, right? Great job, more soon!
~TIO
2/18/2003 c3 42Dream Angel
My dearest Kenny B.,
Now we've begun to hit the juicy section of this uber-cool story which I love like I love my own nonexistent child. In short, I think this story kicks ass. Major ass. The only gripe I have about this particular chapter is that my homeboy, Tom, did not make an appearance. What was up with that? He better be in the next chappie overtime, 'cause I want some finger-licking, guitar-playing, foot-stomping lovin' between him and Faye.
Love ya,
Skye
42Dream AngelMy dearest Kenny B.,
Now we've begun to hit the juicy section of this uber-cool story which I love like I love my own nonexistent child. In short, I think this story kicks ass. Major ass. The only gripe I have about this particular chapter is that my homeboy, Tom, did not make an appearance. What was up with that? He better be in the next chappie overtime, 'cause I want some finger-licking, guitar-playing, foot-stomping lovin' between him and Faye.
Love ya,
Skye
2/7/2003 c2 Punky Stu
Whoa, awesome story. It should be updated. Really soon too. I especially like Tom. He should hook up with Faye.
Whoa, awesome story. It should be updated. Really soon too. I especially like Tom. He should hook up with Faye.
11/9/2002 c2 43Carter Tachikawa
Ooooh, interesting, interesting! I can't wait to read more of this story! Update soon, 'kay? And thanks for the review!~CT
43Carter TachikawaOoooh, interesting, interesting! I can't wait to read more of this story! Update soon, 'kay? And thanks for the review!~CT
10/30/2002 c2 AfterTheRain
I was browsing, as I am prone to do, and chanced upon finding this. It interested me to say the least, even moreso when I actually got down to reading it. I absolutely adore Tom and sincerely hope he will 'get the girl' so to speak. I also think Gabriel is wonderful. This whole story is...so please continue! I will watch this space...
*AFTER_THE_RAIN* (AKA Nancey)
I was browsing, as I am prone to do, and chanced upon finding this. It interested me to say the least, even moreso when I actually got down to reading it. I absolutely adore Tom and sincerely hope he will 'get the girl' so to speak. I also think Gabriel is wonderful. This whole story is...so please continue! I will watch this space...
*AFTER_THE_RAIN* (AKA Nancey)
9/26/2002 c2 16Voodoo Fyrefly
Yesss! Another chapter! I've been waiting for this ^_^ is Faye as strong as she seems? In this chapter i got the distinct feeling that she's bottling it up, putting on a facade...*shrugs* i could be wrong, but hey, she's still a kick-ass girl. And Gabriel...he may have only had the most minute references in this chapter but i still think he's fabulous. The way you articulate Faye's pain and sorrow is so believable...and not many authors can pull that off.
And Lord Jonathon is still an enigma that i'd like to meet quite soon.
Overall...fantastic work, please, chapter 3 soon?
~TIO
16Voodoo FyreflyYesss! Another chapter! I've been waiting for this ^_^ is Faye as strong as she seems? In this chapter i got the distinct feeling that she's bottling it up, putting on a facade...*shrugs* i could be wrong, but hey, she's still a kick-ass girl. And Gabriel...he may have only had the most minute references in this chapter but i still think he's fabulous. The way you articulate Faye's pain and sorrow is so believable...and not many authors can pull that off.
And Lord Jonathon is still an enigma that i'd like to meet quite soon.
Overall...fantastic work, please, chapter 3 soon?
~TIO
9/15/2002 c2 Sicilienne
Okay, here's the deal: I'm here, you're there, and we have a review on our hands. So another amazing chapter, what more can I say (besides the fact that I am, in fact, your number one fan and NO ONE can compete for that title, not even your friend). I like Gabriel, really like Faye, and love that sweetie Tom. You have to write a romance between him and Faye, like you said you would for me. I can read it with Mr. Morran. Yum...
-Skye
Okay, here's the deal: I'm here, you're there, and we have a review on our hands. So another amazing chapter, what more can I say (besides the fact that I am, in fact, your number one fan and NO ONE can compete for that title, not even your friend). I like Gabriel, really like Faye, and love that sweetie Tom. You have to write a romance between him and Faye, like you said you would for me. I can read it with Mr. Morran. Yum...
-Skye