for What Can Be Built Through All That Is Broken8/6/2002 c1 
16Voodoo Fyrefly
hmmm...so far so good!
i especially like Gabriel. you must expand on his character, he is truly intriguing. And Faye seems like she'll evolve into the kind of kick-ass heroine i like. Also...more on the mysterious Lord Jonathon!
Beautiful descriptions, the kind that make you feel like you are actually there. I can see the garden in my mind already. A highly underrated work, please do continue!
16Voodoo Fyreflyhmmm...so far so good!
i especially like Gabriel. you must expand on his character, he is truly intriguing. And Faye seems like she'll evolve into the kind of kick-ass heroine i like. Also...more on the mysterious Lord Jonathon!
Beautiful descriptions, the kind that make you feel like you are actually there. I can see the garden in my mind already. A highly underrated work, please do continue!
7/23/2002 c1 Sicilienne
To my non-buddy Dream Angel:
Ha, ha... you thought that you could hide this from me, didn't you? DIDN'T YOU? Well, I've got eyes all over this site and nothing goes by me without me knowing. Okay... I'm better. You already know what I think of this, or at least you'd better, since I've told you on numerous occasions what I feel about this. It's much more geared toward the fantasy genre than your past stories, which I'm assuming was one of your goals. In the words of Elise, "Ur diction was good". And it was too, with you utilizing a vocubulary far beyond what that of someone your age should have. I like Faye a lot, strong women are awesome (anyone here for Utena?) and I find Gabriel charming. I'm holding out on Tom, but I know that there's definitely a story behind him and I for one am anxious to know what that story is. Annabelle reminds me a bit too much of Rhea in her chipper nature, and yet she does not annoy me in the slightest. Overall, this is a really nice chapter, good rebound from the disaster known as "The Fallen Soldier". I can't wait to read more, and if you should fail to write more, I'm going to have to kill you. That is all.
To my non-buddy Dream Angel:
Ha, ha... you thought that you could hide this from me, didn't you? DIDN'T YOU? Well, I've got eyes all over this site and nothing goes by me without me knowing. Okay... I'm better. You already know what I think of this, or at least you'd better, since I've told you on numerous occasions what I feel about this. It's much more geared toward the fantasy genre than your past stories, which I'm assuming was one of your goals. In the words of Elise, "Ur diction was good". And it was too, with you utilizing a vocubulary far beyond what that of someone your age should have. I like Faye a lot, strong women are awesome (anyone here for Utena?) and I find Gabriel charming. I'm holding out on Tom, but I know that there's definitely a story behind him and I for one am anxious to know what that story is. Annabelle reminds me a bit too much of Rhea in her chipper nature, and yet she does not annoy me in the slightest. Overall, this is a really nice chapter, good rebound from the disaster known as "The Fallen Soldier". I can't wait to read more, and if you should fail to write more, I'm going to have to kill you. That is all.