7/23/2002 c1 Melissa
Nice. I like it. Very well written and made me think of my ex and how true that was for us too.
Nice. I like it. Very well written and made me think of my ex and how true that was for us too.
7/23/2002 c1 40Zantuzuken14
One false love, and true lust. Its a shame.
On the poem, Its more of a song theres no metaphores or any poetic language. Other than that good expression, which is the baby steps of poetry.
One false love, and true lust. Its a shame.
On the poem, Its more of a song theres no metaphores or any poetic language. Other than that good expression, which is the baby steps of poetry.