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9/9/2002 c1 16Adrenaline
That is a GREAT story, I was on the edge of my seat, like whats going to happen next. But i think that you had a great ending, one that make you wanna cry. Loved the story, keep writing :D

-James
8/16/2002 c1 Leena
This story was absolutely amazing.. needless to say I grabbed for a box of kleenex :)

Leena
8/12/2002 c1 Miriam G
Are you kidding? This story does NOT suck. It is very good. So sad and so scary.

I donĀ“t really know what to write, I remember the 11th of september so well and I was so scared. Your story just shows how useless it is to kill other people just because they have a different nationality and religion. It is so sad to think about how all the hopes and dreams of these people were just erased.

Thank you for writing this.
8/5/2002 c1 2HeavenlyKitten
Honestly I thought this story wa really good. Setptember 11th still wiehgts heavly on my heart because of all those people that lost someone they loved and to be honest I almost didn't read this, but I did andI'm glad I did because it's really well written. The peope that was on any of those planes that crashed most likely ther last thought after the initional "Oh My god I"m going to die" was about the people they were leavng behind the ones they would never get to say I love you to or plan that speacial dinner for. It's really sad that so many people died simply becuse other people didn't lik our country or for whateve reason they did what they did. Anyhow sorry review wa so long I reall liked this story.
8/4/2002 c1 Guest
Serena i just got your e-mail with your thingy for this and i wanted to tell you that this is a very very good story.don't do anything to change it! lylas melissa
7/31/2002 c1 Guest
Hey i was reading your diary and so you kept telling everyone to go read this. I thought this story told what happened pretty well. Its a good story.!
7/29/2002 c1 2Tigger5
wow
7/28/2002 c1 5Mousie2003
Ya know, its hard to write about something so recent like the WTC attack. Just like when Pearl Harbor was bombed and the "shot heard around the world" was fired at Lexington and Concord, you can't immediately write something after that doesn't offend some people. And I wasn't offended by your story. When I think of being offended, I think of a commercial on the radio that quotes "What you can't imagine is losing a family member on September 11th" and that hurts because that is a BAD choice of wording. Anyways, I think your story was excellent. If your not happy with it there are some places you can strengthen like the ending before they go through the towers, thoughts, what others around the girls were doing, observations, etc. But I think its fine just how it is, if your happy with it.

Keep Writing,

Nicole
7/27/2002 c1 2Lupin Wolf
-sniffles- That was good Lav. But, since you mentioned some of my mistakes, MUWHAHAHA, I'm gonna mention one. You spelled plane wrong a couple of times. ^~ Still a good fic!

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