Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Leety at school v. 1: The School Shooting (1/2)

4/25/2019 c1 3trashman
Probably a good thing that this has been left to the crypts for 19 years
2/16/2006 c1 13Dark Sploosh
Is this a comedy/satire? If it is, then I find it quite funny, but if you're trying to be serious here...well...I needn't say anymore.
2/2/2004 c1 Nought
One, you shouldn't saw fat girl. Saw big boned or something a little nicer.
Two, I like swords but
'Wriath laughed as he chopped off someone's head with a sword.'
OKayy. That was just out of no where. I give you an F.
1/27/2002 c1 WarAnubimon
Oh man. That was very interesting please countinue
1/27/2002 c1 WarAnubimon
Oh man. That was very interesting please countinue
8/17/2000 c1 Christine
Ordinarily, I respect any author with the guts to put their work where someone can see it, and to write about a sensitive topic. However, I cannot respect this. This piece of writing boggles the mind with the insulting way it portrays every character. Teachers, "fat girls," jocks, everyone. Look, I'm actually in the process of writing a story about a school shooting myself. I don't have a problem with the core topic. But if you can't form a story/novel in a respectful manner...don't post it where people like me will tell you "this is a terrible excuse for writing". Columbine still lurks in the memories of teenagers everywhere. Don't make fun of the massacre.
7/2/2000 c1 iamtheunknownman
that was pretty stupid, and a pretty awful subject to write about, uhhh, well anyways, later, I guess, yeah, see ya..
4/11/2000 c1 Bright Eyes
Weak, horrible, disgusting, awful, end of story.
4/11/2000 c1 LT TRAINR
I know I suk

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service