for In The Tiger's Mouth2/28/2006 c37 sari la elfa
wow! very, super, very, interesting! why dont you people just publish your work? have you? it´ll sell like hot bread, as we say in mexico. congrats!i´m looking ahead to read the rest of your works, silver, bye.
wow! very, super, very, interesting! why dont you people just publish your work? have you? it´ll sell like hot bread, as we say in mexico. congrats!i´m looking ahead to read the rest of your works, silver, bye.
12/15/2005 c37 
1Finnyh
I was a bit shocked to see the epilogue so short, but I suppose i finishs the story off nicely. This is awesome and If youwere to ever publish your stories, I could GUARANTEE that this, along with all your other would reach a number one, best seller! It's so hard to believe that you're only four years older than me! It seems like your are a professional writer and makes everyone else look pathetic in comparison ( i.e - me). I loved every aspect of this story and I can't wait to read your others! This story had me gripped to the edge of my seat by the mysterious parts in the story and I simply love fantasy and things like that...I would say you definatly put this story in the right category! I really should end this reveiew, as I tend to get carroed away with compliments for stories I enjoyes reading...(the longer the reveiw, the better the story is!) Thanks again for being such an awesome writer and writing a brilliant story. Happy writing! All the best...
Nyviay x
1FinnyhI was a bit shocked to see the epilogue so short, but I suppose i finishs the story off nicely. This is awesome and If youwere to ever publish your stories, I could GUARANTEE that this, along with all your other would reach a number one, best seller! It's so hard to believe that you're only four years older than me! It seems like your are a professional writer and makes everyone else look pathetic in comparison ( i.e - me). I loved every aspect of this story and I can't wait to read your others! This story had me gripped to the edge of my seat by the mysterious parts in the story and I simply love fantasy and things like that...I would say you definatly put this story in the right category! I really should end this reveiew, as I tend to get carroed away with compliments for stories I enjoyes reading...(the longer the reveiw, the better the story is!) Thanks again for being such an awesome writer and writing a brilliant story. Happy writing! All the best...
Nyviay x
12/15/2005 c25 Finnyh
OMG! this is awesome! I will read the rest after this, it's taking some reading though!. Thanks once again for you reveiws and I have now edited all typos and sentences. THANKS! Anyway, This is a wonderful story and I love how it's going so far. Everything is perfect and I'm really enjoying it! Theres only a few things that I probably do different in punctuation- which is putting the commas INSIDE the "speech marks" but then again that's just me. use of vocabulary is really gripping! keep up the great standard!
Nyviay x
OMG! this is awesome! I will read the rest after this, it's taking some reading though!. Thanks once again for you reveiws and I have now edited all typos and sentences. THANKS! Anyway, This is a wonderful story and I love how it's going so far. Everything is perfect and I'm really enjoying it! Theres only a few things that I probably do different in punctuation- which is putting the commas INSIDE the "speech marks" but then again that's just me. use of vocabulary is really gripping! keep up the great standard!
Nyviay x
12/13/2005 c12 Finnyh
Okay, well, I havn't reviewed every chapter so far, because I want to get back to reading this awesome story! I love the title and I think your name is ACE! I have loads to say, but I will put it all down in the final reveiw which I will do tomorrow as I continue reading. so far, (as I said I will give more detail of my feelings for your story tommorow) so far...it's awesome and I'm so, jealous because the story, language, descriptions, EVERYTHING is brilliant, I havn't got a word against it!
Nyviay x
Okay, well, I havn't reviewed every chapter so far, because I want to get back to reading this awesome story! I love the title and I think your name is ACE! I have loads to say, but I will put it all down in the final reveiw which I will do tomorrow as I continue reading. so far, (as I said I will give more detail of my feelings for your story tommorow) so far...it's awesome and I'm so, jealous because the story, language, descriptions, EVERYTHING is brilliant, I havn't got a word against it!
Nyviay x
7/22/2005 c37 19faraway4rmhere
I haven't submitted a review to any of your other chapters since you were finished, and it made sense to just finish the story. I really liked it, but I wish the Epilogue was a little longer.
19faraway4rmhereI haven't submitted a review to any of your other chapters since you were finished, and it made sense to just finish the story. I really liked it, but I wish the Epilogue was a little longer.
7/6/2005 c2 1Bish
Hi! I was just wondering when you would update your story 'Unexpected Revenge'. I was looking for a chapter I hadn't reviewed so I could leave you a message-I've just moved to Australia! I didnt know it would be so cold here! I wanted to tell you for a long time but I couldn't find your email address so this is the only way I could tell you... :) Well anyway, thanks for reviewing my story, its finished at last! I'm still waiting for you to update Unexpected Revenge!
1BishHi! I was just wondering when you would update your story 'Unexpected Revenge'. I was looking for a chapter I hadn't reviewed so I could leave you a message-I've just moved to Australia! I didnt know it would be so cold here! I wanted to tell you for a long time but I couldn't find your email address so this is the only way I could tell you... :) Well anyway, thanks for reviewing my story, its finished at last! I'm still waiting for you to update Unexpected Revenge!
6/1/2005 c2 Arkash
I like this chapter, nice descriptions and it has a sense of mystery.
The letter is intriguing, and I wonder why Calida fainted. I'll read more later.
Good Job! *_*
I like this chapter, nice descriptions and it has a sense of mystery.
The letter is intriguing, and I wonder why Calida fainted. I'll read more later.
Good Job! *_*
5/21/2005 c1 Arkash
Very intriguing beginning with Calida's mysterious past.
Calida seems like a well rounded character, beautiful too.
The main character in my novel has red hair and green eyes. Our tastes seem to be alike.
Great chapter! *_*
Very intriguing beginning with Calida's mysterious past.
Calida seems like a well rounded character, beautiful too.
The main character in my novel has red hair and green eyes. Our tastes seem to be alike.
Great chapter! *_*
9/13/2004 c37 11Wolfie Star26
this is aweosme i loved every bit of it. its one of those stories that has a moral. great job.
11Wolfie Star26this is aweosme i loved every bit of it. its one of those stories that has a moral. great job.
9/13/2004 c19 Wolfie Star26
this is awesome, but in the last chapter, it should be japanese kimono, not toga. i'll read the rest later.
this is awesome, but in the last chapter, it should be japanese kimono, not toga. i'll read the rest later.
6/18/2004 c5 7Teigra Michaels
Right, this is caitlin, i read to chapter 5 of your fab story and i thought that it was great.if i had the time right now i would read the rest. i have learnt a few new words from you and i may use them, if i can remeber them. oh i just want to say; you put the commas inside the speech marks not outside(hehehe).
7Teigra MichaelsRight, this is caitlin, i read to chapter 5 of your fab story and i thought that it was great.if i had the time right now i would read the rest. i have learnt a few new words from you and i may use them, if i can remeber them. oh i just want to say; you put the commas inside the speech marks not outside(hehehe).
9/13/2003 c37 Priscilla
That was AWESOME. GREAT story. It was suspenseful, sad, and adventuresome.
That was AWESOME. GREAT story. It was suspenseful, sad, and adventuresome.
7/30/2003 c10 6Secretive
I LOVE this story! I love Paul, and there is actually a herione out there I can relate with! You are a wonderful writer!
6SecretiveI LOVE this story! I love Paul, and there is actually a herione out there I can relate with! You are a wonderful writer!
7/28/2003 c37 Anonymously Unknown
That was such a great story and if you can get it publish it will be sure to be a best seller. And if you do get it published i will be the first to get it. You story is the best i have read on fiction press. I wished it had a second part that took place after they moved into the beach house.
That was such a great story and if you can get it publish it will be sure to be a best seller. And if you do get it published i will be the first to get it. You story is the best i have read on fiction press. I wished it had a second part that took place after they moved into the beach house.