
12/14/2002 c12
2flameluvr
i knew there was something fishy about esmeralda and felton... but, when will she start using her powers? i think that the whole idea of the guides and people in jewelry is awesome. you are very creative!

i knew there was something fishy about esmeralda and felton... but, when will she start using her powers? i think that the whole idea of the guides and people in jewelry is awesome. you are very creative!
12/14/2002 c6 flameluvr
oooh... paul seems kewl; but a bit... weird. you'd think that he could have introduced himself a little sooner... must-read-more! on to the next chapter...
oooh... paul seems kewl; but a bit... weird. you'd think that he could have introduced himself a little sooner... must-read-more! on to the next chapter...
12/14/2002 c5 flameluvr
see, felton and esmeralda? kindness DOES pay... *thinks to herself* filthy scumbags... on to the next chapter!
see, felton and esmeralda? kindness DOES pay... *thinks to herself* filthy scumbags... on to the next chapter!
12/14/2002 c4 flameluvr
ooooh! the boy has a LOT to do with the story; i can feel it... have to read more!
ooooh! the boy has a LOT to do with the story; i can feel it... have to read more!
12/14/2002 c2 flameluvr
oooh! this is really good sofar. im gonna be reviewing each chapter, so youll be hearing from me alot. well, i have to find out what happens, so toodles!
oooh! this is really good sofar. im gonna be reviewing each chapter, so youll be hearing from me alot. well, i have to find out what happens, so toodles!
12/13/2002 c1 flameluvr
this is a good start to a story. i like how it doesn't have too much detail, just a sort f beginning, to get the reader intrigued. well, on to the next chapter!
this is a good start to a story. i like how it doesn't have too much detail, just a sort f beginning, to get the reader intrigued. well, on to the next chapter!
12/13/2002 c30 silver
omg! theres no more! RITE MORE RITE MORE RITE MORE PLZ!
omg! theres no more! RITE MORE RITE MORE RITE MORE PLZ!