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7/1/2003 c1 80Plato's Optic Runaway
i love the line about the twisted knife. wonderful job. i sound too optimistic...but i can't help it. this sort of stuff appeals to me.
9/12/2002 c1 14Angel Nazi
ya i liked that pome it's so true. um...keep it up
8/12/2002 c1 Jedi Master Smith
Very good poem. This one is great at showing a depressing feeling. Kinda sad but well written.
8/8/2002 c1 16wild star child
Sorrow in this is bone deep. It sobers me. Time won't heal all, in that your right. But hopefully it can ease. A very serious, well-written piece.
7/26/2002 c1 1Arsenic
I like this. When I first read it, I wasn't sure of the flow, but reading over it, it flows perfectly. Wonderful.

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