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4/11/2000 c1 Janet
this was LOL funny! I laughed out loud a number of times! I kind of liked how you showed that communism is a failure... even though you didn't get into it deeply. THe parts where he went to JIggly Goo and everybody were a little confusing though, and the Jamal character was very funny and could have been developed more. ANyway, lol you're funny!

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