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8/7/2004 c1 51Helgmelia
It's very simple, but in a nice way. You might want to punch up the visuals just a little to make it more vivid. (For example, instead of using two syllables to say "many an (island)", you could find a really strong, specific adjective to describe the types of islands that are sinking into water.) But the concept is solid, and I like that you're carrying on the tradition of the classical myth.
8/5/2002 c1 71Toireasa
Sweet. I like it. Weird and fun to read. Nice work! Oh, and thanks for reviewing some stuff of mine, and I know it took me forever to return the favor, but I did see your reviews, I just couldn't find the time! Ack. Have to go! And when I say Gods, I mean that... as in... whoa, plural. Hrm hrm. Thankyou! And great poem!

~~Toireasa
8/2/2002 c1 7Lilith Onaitsirc
I always like this one... it's a very good description of the neputnians.. and if they wrote it (*wink *wink *nudge *nudge).. they obviously lover her! Keep on going girl friend!

*Lilith

P.S.- yeah.. i'm weird.

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