for The Powers of Prediction6/25/2003 c6 Daarthe Lemelemie
a CLIFFHANGER? :O
mehehe i know i cant complain. i do those all teh time ;) nice! write more soon :D (and i promise i'll update my fics too asap, my holidays approacheth so i'll have plenty of boredom time to update :D)
a CLIFFHANGER? :O
mehehe i know i cant complain. i do those all teh time ;) nice! write more soon :D (and i promise i'll update my fics too asap, my holidays approacheth so i'll have plenty of boredom time to update :D)
6/20/2003 c6 a random smith lover
Heh. You know who this is. ;) Whoot! That rocked as usual Vorsie. Keep it up girlie! Yay! :D:D
Heh. You know who this is. ;) Whoot! That rocked as usual Vorsie. Keep it up girlie! Yay! :D:D
6/1/2003 c5 
1Flyyboy06
Definitely feeling this story. It's really good-you are going to continue, right? I updated Codename: Butterfly, if you wanna check it out. Keep it up, you have some real talent.
1Flyyboy06Definitely feeling this story. It's really good-you are going to continue, right? I updated Codename: Butterfly, if you wanna check it out. Keep it up, you have some real talent.
4/23/2003 c5 Aran Tera
Very good. Can't wait for another update! And don't worry, slightly crummy endings are better than very corny ones!
Very good. Can't wait for another update! And don't worry, slightly crummy endings are better than very corny ones!
2/21/2003 c5 lemelemie didnt sign in
yay! :D go vorserkeien!
yay! :D go vorserkeien!
1/7/2003 c4 LemeL
hey, this is pretty good so far :) i know its discouraging not to get a bazillion reviews at once ;) but still its well done
hey, this is pretty good so far :) i know its discouraging not to get a bazillion reviews at once ;) but still its well done
10/15/2002 c4 2Playboy-bunny
Well, you said for me to give an honest opinion, and here it is. Firstly, it's a good concept, I like the characters and everything. Brilliant creations. Though I do think you should make more exciting things happen, so as to catch the readers' attention. :) Other from that, it's good. Keep it up!
2Playboy-bunnyWell, you said for me to give an honest opinion, and here it is. Firstly, it's a good concept, I like the characters and everything. Brilliant creations. Though I do think you should make more exciting things happen, so as to catch the readers' attention. :) Other from that, it's good. Keep it up!
8/29/2002 c3 Rebel Mission
This is a really good story! Keep it up Vorse, and if ya need more help with ideas...Just email me! :D keep it up!
Toodles!
p.s there, happy? lol :p
This is a really good story! Keep it up Vorse, and if ya need more help with ideas...Just email me! :D keep it up!
Toodles!
p.s there, happy? lol :p
8/20/2002 c2 21Majanti
well, the frst part is good. I actally liked it. I give you a piece of advidce: be careful not making it too long...you might get annoyed with it before the story will be completed, or you may risk to finish it too abruptly. Apart from this. I liked it. Keep up with the good work...
21Majantiwell, the frst part is good. I actally liked it. I give you a piece of advidce: be careful not making it too long...you might get annoyed with it before the story will be completed, or you may risk to finish it too abruptly. Apart from this. I liked it. Keep up with the good work...