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5LauraNicole Griffin
Your writing is so sad. Its sad but very good. Your an amazing writer and you write what you feel and know.
5LauraNicole GriffinYour writing is so sad. Its sad but very good. Your an amazing writer and you write what you feel and know.
8/2/2002 c1 32charisma1525
Wow, that was really sad, but extremely good. I liked the repetition, I think that it really helped the poem. I know that I feel this way sometimes too, so I can definitly relate to it. Great job!
32charisma1525Wow, that was really sad, but extremely good. I liked the repetition, I think that it really helped the poem. I know that I feel this way sometimes too, so I can definitly relate to it. Great job!
8/2/2002 c1 2QueenShelbington
This is a great poem, I also think it would also be great if you could make some music for this poem and turn it into a song =)
2QueenShelbingtonThis is a great poem, I also think it would also be great if you could make some music for this poem and turn it into a song =)